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Reviewer: NebulaDoodles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2026 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.


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Reviewer: BB9909 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2025 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story , i love the idea that while a person is shrinking everyone else around acting as if nothing weird is happing and so ignorant to the situation. 

but how old is everybody is in this story? is Asuna older than Silica and her 3 friends? can you just explain that ?



Author's Response:

I assume it was somewhere after SAO but before the Alicization. So like, 17 and 14? Or 15 and 18. As For Silica's friends, they're about her age, yes. 

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