[Report This]Date: February 01 2025 12:12 AM Title: Thinking About Killing
Captivating! I love how grounded it feels - this relationship could exist if tinies existed.
Irrelevant, but any chance of Ambrosia getting updated again?
Author's Response:
I think if tinies existed this might be exactly the relationship I would have. It parallels some of my IRL relationships.
Totally relevant question, I think! I do want to update Ambrosia, and I have a pathway forward for the story. I want to return to it eventually but for now I think I need to explore around size fiction in different ways. I don't want to make any concrete promises but I do intend to return to it!
Thank you for the review <3
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 9:32 PM Title: Thinking About Killing
Consensual sadomasochistic romance is amazing. I love the tension and playfulness of it. Fun characters and a great payoff!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! The romance angle is really fun to explore, and for once I'm really aiming to draw some tension out. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope it continues to pay off <3
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 3:37 PM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
Wow this is an absolutely phenomenal piece of work, the prose is far and above the majority of works here and the characters are so well made.
The dialogue is impeccable and I can honestly say this perfectly captured the darker urges that lurk in the back of human consciousness.
I hope you produce far more work like this, this is an exemplary piece and I await future chapters with baited breath
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Such high praise! I will definitely keep it up, I'm starting to get a good idea for where this is heading and it's been really fun to explore the characters. The urges and the conversations are things I've experienced and I think it's really valuable to examine those feelings. I want to keep delving into what drives us to these violent fantasies from both sides of the violence. I think it's really beautiful when a sadist meets a masochist, and I want to celebrate that along the way towards the edge of human desires.
Thank you so much for the feedback, I hope future chapters continue to impress! I will have a new chapter very soon.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 12:22 PM Title: Thinking About Killing
Another amazing addition to this series. I loved the three-dimensional characterization of both Tess and Amy. Tess being an absolute sadist, but still ultimately deep down respectful and conscientious of her power over Amy; while Amy, to the onlooker, is cute and timid, but within probably more depraved than her large "friend."
The dialogue was top-tier, honestly. It flows so well and provides a clear picture of what's going on without even needing to show the actions, details, and specifics. Excited for more ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much. Your feedback is extremely valuable, and I'm most glad I think that the characters come through. I worry sometimes the tinies I write tend to be a little flat (pun intended) and it means a lot to know they're coming off the page through the dialogue. Amy being adorable was probably the most difficult, as I tend towards cruel and unwilling. She's so fucking cute it's hard to keep her around XD
We'll see how long she sticks around ;)
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you and others take the time to leave a review <3
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 6:06 AM Title: Thinking About Killing
Wow. You really understand the sadist dilemma. I've never seen it portrayed so well oddly enough. There is nothing scarier than thinking you might go too far with someone you care about.
Author's Response:
It's something people don't often realize coming from the top, and it's something I have thought a lot about from both a sizey and BDSM perspective. I'm glad you enjoyed it so far <3 I hope to continue to explore that middle ground of sadism and macochism.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 1:37 AM Title: Thinking About Killing
Yesssss been waiting for the next one!! I love how you describe both of their desires its just so good. I hope we get some more of that shoe action she keeps talking about! You write these characters so well too all the dialogue flows really smooth and Im just sucked into it when I start reading. Hope to see more!!
Is there anywhere else I can find more of your work btw? Can't get enough clearly haha
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the continued feedback! More shoe action to be sure, coming up in future updates! I have a few ideas for how things will go, and the shape of the story is becoming clear.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2025 3:47 AM Title: First Kiss
Just when I didnt think it could get better!! My god the way you describe every thought and feeling she has about this girl is SO tantalizing I love it. Can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response:
So glad you like the direction it's headed! I'd love to hear your thoughts on the latest update when/if you have the time! I really appreciate your feedback <3
[Report This]Date: January 13 2025 10:30 PM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
This is something special, just wow. I love the conflicting thoughts between her own personal thoughts/desires, and the society around her. I love the idea of having to protect tinies but there being people out there that just cant help but think about squishing them. This is the best thing Ive read on here in a while and really really hope theres more chapters to it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It really means a lot <3
The conflict of a sadist really is challenging, I'm glad it shines through. Some of us can't help but think that way. I hope you like the new chapter, I just uploaded it!
[Report This]Date: January 12 2025 11:18 AM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
One word, Fantastic
For the first time, I've read something I can share with me sadistic friend, who's not into size stuff, and believe he's going to thoroughly enjoy it from this point of view.
You embodied the inner struggle of sadist, thank you!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'd love to hear from your sadist friend's perspective. I'm curious to know which notes ring true, and I'm glad you also connected with it. I was pleasantly surprised to see so many reviews so soon, I really appreciate the feedback! I hope to add more in the next few days or so.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2025 2:47 PM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
I really like the inner conflict happening in her mind. Thinking that something is fucked up, but still hot should be something familiar to a lot of people with this fetish.
Overall, I loved this and I can’t wait for more.
Author's Response:
It's certainly a cognitive dissonance I want to explore a little more. There are things we desire which are not acceptable, but it is lovely to be able to share that with people and accept that we can have these fantasies. Thank you so much for leaving a review, it means a lot! The support was really surprising; I wasn't sure if this would connect with people.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2025 8:07 AM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
Surprisingly emotional, but I enjoyed it a lot! It's very interesting (and hot) to be in the mind of someone on the other end. Most stories are from a tiny perspective (which is also enjoyable) but this is just a nice change of pace. The descriptors and vivid imagery. The shoe stuff especially gets to me. Great work ♥️
Author's Response:
I'm glad the eroticism carries over to the 'other end', as you say. I do think that what a lot of stories lack is a sadist's perspective. It's just a sadist and hey they like hurting people. Don't get me wrong, that's hot, but it's a lot more nuanced than that under the hood. Shoe stuff gets me too <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I was surprised I got so many reviews so quickly over the weekend! I'll definitely be expanding on this as soon as I can. I have a good idea for where I want it to go. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts!
[Report This]Date: January 10 2025 3:02 PM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
Another unique perspective! It's refreshing to see such a different perspective in this genre. The girl's innocent yet curious description of how she'd interact with tiny beings is both endearing and intriguing. Beautiful work. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I wanted to try something a little different to break away from the usual pornservice. Thank you for the review, stay tuned for what's next!
[Report This]Date: January 10 2025 8:16 AM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
ow, this is incredible stuff. I don't see much stories around here with deeper, personal meaning and a care for character's psychology. Guess I shouldn't expect them in this kind of place, but it's just so goddamn satisfying to read something with this edge. It really spoke to me. I think I'm on the other size of the size spectrum, but also felt so guilty and fucked up for wishing that giant people did horrible stuff to me (or for being into this kink in general). Luckily I am accepting it more now, but I felt so seen by your story. Although I'm not much into gore, it feels really sexy too!
Really looking forward to reading more of this! Again, incredible job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad it resonated with you. I find that we all have this stupid silly secret and carry it however we need to survive. Its not fair. Our feelings, your desires are just as valid as anyone else's.
It means a lot to know someone connected deeply with something I wrote, the very highest praise. Thank you <3
As for more, I'm hoping to chip away at this one while I've got the momentum. I'm going to try the whole "upload a chapter whenever the story falls out of the new section" meta strategy.
Thanks again, and stay tuned!
Date: January 10 2025 7:05 AM Title: Tantalizing Nightmare
Well that was interesting. I want to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found it interesting! I'm not sure yet where I'll take it but I have some ideas. I want to develop a stage to communicate the emotional connection between sadism and masochism.