




Date: June 10 2025 10:59 AM Title: Epilogue
I feel obligated to review this story here since this story doesn't have enough attention. I apologize if it sounds like I'm just spewing out words like a fucking schizo (i probably do because i am) .
I could genuinely see this beyond the scope of just being a fetish story. I mean, there is obviously still giantess content, but it doesn't really make itself the primary focus of the story. The story is the main focus of the story (I mean no shit but I hope you get what I'm saying).
The plot is really good. I really like the story being set up in our world as a war between two different alien races (Earth and them) instead of just a fantasy story between two different races on the same planet or whatever. I might not be willing to fight to the death for my country, but fuck I will be willing to fight to the death for Earth. Speaking of the story being set in the real world, I love the detail you went into with all of the specific cities you brought up. Krakow, Bolgota, Cape Town, Mumbai, Brisbane, Almaty, hell I didn't even know Halifax was a real city before I read this. It really makes the story feel a lot more genuine. The plot is also captivating as well. I read this entire thing in one night and was on the edge of my seat the entire time. Out of all of the fucking genocidal freaks among the aliens, there had to have been at least one who had a conscience, I'm happy that there was at least one and I think it's kind of ironic that that person was the one who started this entire extermination campaign in the first place. I find it insane how such an advanced species still struggles with basic sympathy and still bores itself with issues of a caste system and genes and still use slavery, I thought that they'd get that shit over with and be able to take care of everyone when they became a space-faring species but maybe we're destined to forever be plagued with those problems.
I think the only thing I could complain about is maybe the character development. I feel like maybe some more could've been done about Rashad, Ji-Young, etc, but I think the story is maybe a little too short to have fully developed them and the work that was done on them was fantastic.
I know the ending is supposed to be happy for Jaehyun with him having a happy family and all that but I still can't help but feel sad still. The world is still fucked, those aliens could still pull up any minute and finish the job, but I feel sad mainly (and this is probably selfish of me) because that Jaehyun and Hannah didn't get to be together and that Hannah is still something like half a kilometer tall. Hannah is never going to live a normal life. She's going to outlive the last true friend she has: Jaehyun. She’s going to witness everyone she has truly known and loved in her life die. That's fucked up. She should be living her best life and have everything she wants given to her, but no, she's destined to only watch humanity redevelop, but never able to truly be with and partake in humanity. Maybe this is too deep and shit usually can never be that deep especially considering I'm on this website, but still, it’s sad.
I'll end my rambling that sounds like it's the words scratched on a wall in a psych ward here. Damn, this was a good read. Keep up the incredible work.





Date: February 24 2025 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219
Another excellent story from you!! So sad what happened at the end of Chapter 2 :(
I would love to see that demoness get some karma but knowing some of your other stories - something tells me that won't happen.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope the next chapters explain more.





Date: January 27 2025 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219
A very excellent first chapter. Eagerly waiting for more to come
Author's Response:
Thank you! More on the way soon.





Date: January 25 2025 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219
Smells like Citrus? Something tells me that 1,900ft demoness corpse will exude a far less pleasant smell after about a week or so. This isn't something that gets touched on very much in these sorts of stories, but then again usually giants are portrayed as invincible, so the seldom die anyway. But in a story like this were they can be killed and die, eventually its going to decay. Its not like they can be cremated or buried either.
Managing to kill one might be an impressive feat, but that corpse is going to be a problem for people in a wide radius for a VERY long time to come. Probably years, possibly decades even. The bigger a giant is, the longer it takes for the body to completely rot away. And the skeleton likely never will. The only positive is that it would probably enrich the soil or something, but that's about it.
Anyway, was this story inspired by Attack on Titan? I've never seen that, but I know OF it, and that's kinda what I'm reminded of here.
The manner of killing these giants by flying planes full of explosives directly into them reminds me of that chapter in your other story where Parker defeated the rebels in Ostrov. The rebels there tried to do that same thing to her, but for some reason she managed to survive. If I'm to be completely honest, I don't think that realistically Parker would have survived it though, and she'd have ended up dead just like that Demoness.
Anyway, I'm not sure where this story is headed but it will be interesting to find out.
BTW, I hope your recovery is going well and you'll get back to 100% eventually. But even if not, you are still able to write which is a good thing. I just want to say that with a story like this one here which isn't overtly fetish material, this is the sort of thing you could perhaps get published in some form of mainstream media and potentially earn an income doing that. I'm not sure how well it would work out, but its always something you could consider anyway. Because that's the case with Attack on Titan, so there is some sort of niche out there for something like this outside of the fetish community, if you know what I mean.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I mean, the citrus thing was just a fun thing for me. Like this already wholly unrealistic so I was just having fun with it. I bet it would smell like shit if it were real and they were decaying. The corpses would be a problem for sure if they do manage to take one down.
I have never seen Attack on Titan, I am aware of it but don't really know too much other than what people have told me, I don't watch a lot of animes to tell the truth.
Thank you for the recovery wishes, it's still tough, but we're getting there.
Date: January 25 2025 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219
I like it so far. Is her linguistics prowess foreshadowing communication with them? I think rampage stories can be a little dull if you don’t have insight into the giant.
Author's Response:
Could be, I don't really want to give anything away way too early, but thank you for liking it so far!
Date: January 23 2025 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219
Excellent first chapter.
Sorry, not sure best way to phrase this but how "nude and sexual" do you plan to make this? Like will it just mostly be some breasts stuff, or will you explore some action with nipples, ass, vagina, etc.?
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Not planning for it to be as lewd as my other stories, espcially the stories I'm working on right now, but there will still be a bit of lewdness coming up in the next couple chapters.





Date: January 23 2025 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219
Excellent chapter. Looking forward to the next ones :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you enjoy!