Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2026 9:11 PM Title: Over a Grape

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Ijod Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2025 6:42 PM Title: Over a Grape

I've liked this ever since I first read it during the contest. A neat subversion of the more gentle borrower stories that I usually read. His name being Lentil made me snort as well. Quite good dialogue here. I like that Henrietta isn't too cruel either. She lets him have the grape! She doesn't want him to starve! How nice of her. And just the slight normalization of sticking someone up your ass is always very hot. It's shocking and taboo, but common enough that it's a trend in her coven lol. Good job with this one!