I just wanted to say, seeing Reika's character development here is 10/10, I loved her interaction with Rin and Masanori!

I am so glad I have more chapters after this otherwise I would be dead. NOOOOOOO! This was heart wrenching ToT

Man, Kaida's destruction was super hot to read. I'm loving the development of everything! Masanori and Rin are peak, and Jin and Reika have such a cute thing going on. I won't lie, I'd love a destructive Kaida spin off. I'm almost cheering for muscle wife lol

Thanks for the chapters!

Reika is SUCH a tease, but what an adorable chapter! I absolutely loved it, as short as it was. 10/10

Never change, Reika. Never change.

Just reviewing in this earlier chapter to say that the hug was suuuuper cute. I love these two! But her comment on the last chapter made me worry a bit... don't go megalomaniacal again, Reika!

Ok, like most people i decided i had to log in to give you a review.

First off, i want you to know that i hated how much this story sucked me in. I was checking the site every day for updates to this. and I've never been a Gore/violence story type person. in fact i go out of my way to avoid those stories nowadays. But your descriptions of Reika and how she came to be the monster makes so much sense. real Anakin to Vader vibes.

Anyways I loved the main story, because duh Jin and Reika are adorable together, and enjoyed the prequel more than i thought i would. even though part of me was still blissfully optimistic that Arata could break though to her even in the final chapter. 

Wow, I felt some weird feelings, imagining her in original story, when she killed people, it was nothing personal at all, more like domonstration, it was scary, but kinda .... normal? I guess...

But now, she is angry, she is hurt, she felt betrayled and for first time, she fully emerged in her powers....

In comment I made before, you told that you dont know if pace is right, well, she is aready ready to eat people, and she have more than 20 years to go... so I think that there will come some guild, after all of it, but I will love to read, how she is gonna enjoy it.


Power corrupts, but she probably had it in her all along, coz one of her first thougs of this world, was if she is able to bend it to her will.....and....she certainly is 

Author's Response:

The killing this time felt very personal compare to the casual cruelty she usually shows. But 100 years is a very long time and perhaps she slowly grew indifference to these emotions.

Still catching up with all the chapters because this fic is peak, just wanted to leave my support review.

Also, your reply to my last comment was scary. Please don't change my happy ending ToT

Wow, just wow

Its getting more and more interesting, when we look at fact, thats not that long time, since she arrived to this world and she will try to get home for next 20 years and then 80 years rulling with iron heel.


I love how she slowly accept herself in this world.

But is really interesting, how powerfull are words, in world you created, in cruel world filled with magic and death, simple words are powerfull as magic, coz its amazing to watch, from the very beginning she hears how strong she is, how powerfull she is, and there is something in her personaly, burried, deep, what wants to rule and conquer, but its burried under her humanity, and she slowly realize that she is indeed powerfull, and after her fight with Kaida, she accepted that - "I am beyond all of you" it wasnt just for Kaida, it wasnt just for demons, but for humans to, that statement was for everyone.

And Mayume? oh god, she knows what she do, she is briliant, less powerfull, sure, she knows that, and she played her cards very well, I wonder ifs maybe even fear of Reika? Mayume will never admit that for sure, but as she tried to separete Reika from humanity, playing dangerous words, it looks like, she dont want her to be on human side, it would be problematic for whole realm of demons, but have her on "her side" yes, she will "serve" under Reika, but she will be free to do whatever she wanted and without fear.

So is amazing how Reika already, after few weeks see herself above everyone, I supposse, it will not take long for her to kill first people (wilingly) or destroy first city, she is now very playfull, but as she always add something disturbing, like, " I will keep him until he entertains me" she did not said that exactly, but meaning was clear.

And that she dont care about city, what was controled by Mayume, it was perfect. And not that she simply dont care about them, but they BORE her.... not even single thought of saving them, of helping them.

And Arata? He is right probably, Reika is changing, the changes what he saw are real

Its amazing to see her changes, how from kind, normal girl, what did not wanted to kill anyone become so quickly good in her new role, she already dont see people as equals. So how long she will have patience with them? How long it will take before she will demenad to be worshiped? as in the paintings in her future palace?




I hope and I would love to see, how her palace/stronghold was created, how her throne was created, how she got first slaves etc.


I am very conflicted as, I really liked original story and how it ended, but some big part of me wanted her go even further on her road to rule, to take over real world or something :D 


I got heavily inspired by your work, so I am trying to make my own story, coz way you tell this story, those minor, but supper important comment, (Reika is not here to hurt them, "YET") etc , it really make epic atmosphere.

I cant wait for another chapter :)