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Reviewer: NineFoxTail Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2025 3:31 PM Title: Mimi's Outing

The liberation of the goddesses and their beautiful outfits already have me looking forward to the next story.


And I suppose I should make a wish to the goddesses for even more active cave explorations and acts of service!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2025 11:08 AM Title: Mimi's Outing

Okay this chapter was really fun and was very interesting and the ending got me laughing hard

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2025 3:35 PM Title: Ren's Visit

Omg !!!! You’re back glad to see you man !!!

been a while and you came back with a goated chapter overall like you always do 

okay Reyemi is both awesome and confusing of a character lol her moments of being protective of humanity and the next close to extermination of humanity is wild like damn girl hard to tell if you’re a good girl or just another Layla lol

overall her character has really went up the interesting level for me

Ren Continues to be a very good character and friend here but a full blown dummy why would you bring up the whole ( bow chicks bow wow ) moments with Reyemi knowing how emotionally compromise she is damn it !

the religion thing will be an interesting development that I didn’t see coming.

and I’m surprised she hasn’t found a planet suitable for humanity so she can finally be more than ….well the planet lol

overall great stuff as always and glad you’re back after a while.

Reviewer: Lightning Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2025 4:31 PM Title: Ryan's Day

Amazing chapter, Finally Mimi knows about Ryans gts fetish and of course Mimi would love it lmao. Though when she finally sees Ryan when shes at her full size and she knows full well Ryan is into it, I bet she will go crazy. Like in part 1 she was completely normal when visiting her home town but as soon as she grew to her full size, the streets literally started flooding lol.

Sure Mimi has seen Ryan before when she was at full size but back then they had reunited after 16 years, she had trauma and then the whole world was ending so she didn't have time for those desires but now without any of that in the way she can let loose. It would be hilarious if Ryemi found out just how much a freak her mother is and that her father is actually pretty tame in comparison.

I'm always a fan of romance between Ryan and Mimi, so this was awesome, loved the scene between them. If they do it with Mimi being full sized, I can imagine Ryan bringing the Godslayer mark 3 along with him lol. Ryan does have the authority to have something like that made, on the surface for human self defense but in reality, its to pleasure his goddess girlfriend. I mean if he did it to Iggy and Fae then of course he has to do it to Mimi right lmao. Though after he makes it self destruct, Mimi would probably prefer round 2 to be just Ryan alone since just the idea of Ryan being that vulnerable in her is more than enough to get her going.

Has Ryan told Mimi about what he did during those 16 years, with making Artemis and everything, Im pretty sure he has since, Mimi is totally cool with him being leader of the planet and isn't surprised about his science knowlege despite him just being in the army the last time she saw him.

And of course everyone knows what Ryemi is doing, which is hilarious. I wonder how Ren reacts to this since I am certain he is in love with Ryemi or at least he was in his ending chapter. But now he seems to be with Melody, does he think that Ryemi isn't interested in that kind of relationship, especially now that shes basically a permanently colossal near omnipotent goddess. Whereas before she was human sized nearly all the time and basically with Ren at all times.

I kind of see a parallel with Ryan and Mimi, on how becoming a goddess actually caused distance between them, with Ryan ending up leaving for 16 years and it seems that Ren and Ryemi have not talked much in the year that has passed. Though of course Ryemi is more in love with Ren then ever, her jealous reaction was adorable and hilarious and yet pretty terrifying to everyone else lol.

I can see Ryan and Ren bonding over their shared experience with having a close friend feel distant after becoming a goddess. Maybe Ryan would advise Ren to just try to talk to Ryemi and not run away like he did. Though running away did work out for Ryan but it also cost him a lot.

Its interesting seeing Mimi and Ryan being cautious of Ryemi now, its warranted but it would probably make Ryemi feel even more lonely if she knew.

Though Ryemi has changed after getting her power and all this responsibility. Before she was pretty much one of the kindest characters in the series, she was willing to reduce her lifespan for the sake of people she does not even know, and she never really hurt anyone unless it was absolutely necessary, like she even showed Layla mercy and even felt bad about killing Zu afterwards lol.

But now she shrunk those rebels who when compared to nearly any other goddess who Ryemi would spare in the past, their crimes were pretty tame considering they didn't even kill anyone and had better justification then nearly any goddess, so I doubt the old Ryemi would have punished them like that. Im assuming the responsibility of having to enforce the law and peace made her harden her heart. And it does not help that no one including her parents wants to actually call her out, in case they upset her which could lead to world ending results.

Also I like how shrinking those rebels was described as this scary punishment that hurt Ryemis heart to do but she believes is necessary. But then she does the same thing to Ren just because he blushed when Melody flirted with him lmao. Now granted she didn't actually leave Ren in the street but Ren did literally nothing wrong. Not to mention Ren didn't even know Ryemi was watching him, from his point of view he was just going about his day, talked to Melody and then the whole country is covered in darkness and hes now ant size lol

Ren did take it pretty well but considering the description of how scary of a punishment it was, Ren must have still been scared even with Melody taking care of him. Though speaking of Melody, it is hilarious that Ryemi did this out of jealousy, at first without thinking and then she left him like that on purpose because that would be admitting defeat somehow, which is also concerning lol. But the hilarious part is that all she did was bring Melody and Ren closer together. Since Ren was completely dependent on Melody now to do anything, she basically gifted Ren to her.

Ryemi getting jealous later when she sees Ren with Melody and even considering destroying the ship with all her friends and family on it just because this annoyed her so much was amazing. Like where else would Ren be, he pretty much has to stay with Melody if he wants to survive and not end up like those rebels and its Ryemis fault hes in that situation in the first place but shes the one complaining lmao.

Will there be a side story about Ren and Melody when Ren was shrunk and living with her, getting Rens point of view would be really interesting and also everyone elses reactions. I wonder if Ryan and Mimi could tell that Ryemi is in love with Ren and that's the reason she shrunk Ren in the first place. Also how long would Ryemi have left Ren shrunk if not for the whole birthday party thing?

Though as funny as this I can see it being serious as well since from Rens point of view Ryemi is pretty much the nicest person ever, so for her to do this to him, he probably assumes he must have really hurt her. Despite it just being Ryemi being jealous. It is pretty sad seeing Ren actually being even a little afraid of Ryemi and trembling in her presence with how close they were before this.

I realize I took most of this review up with events from the last chapter but seeing the Ryemi scene again reminded me of stuff I forgot to mention last chapter and I already mentioned the stuff for Ryan and Mimi before.

This was an awesome chapter, loved the Ryan and Mimi romance, their scene was amazing. Definitely looking forward to the scene but with Mimi full sized, more Ryan and Mimi in general and of course Ren finally getting with Ryemi lol

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2025 8:46 PM Title: Ryan's Day

Oh so this is what you meant when i talked about the last review i did on part 2.... damn did mimi and ryan went in on the bed!


theres a lot of fun in these type of stories and the best part is that i dont really have to put much thought into doing reviews like these as i can go in head empty and be chill about it


thanks for the chapter!!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2025 3:38 PM Title: Ryan's Day

Let’s gooo we are back and also that’s alright about being non consist release schedule honestly talk all the time you need overall loved this chapter and the fact that everyone knows what reyumi is doing is 10 times funnier 

also understandable about the fear of what she could and can do with her unlimited powers which is interesting that the parents would have from their own child


Can wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: 1337noob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2025 9:25 AM Title: Ryan's Day

Thanks for letting us see the first of the side stories so soon!

"once Estheia lifts the ban on growing to our full size" Come on don't tease us like this lol. Now I want a mommy Estheia redemption arc; maybe something that will thaw out her stoic persona?

Interesting that everyone already knows what happens during those "thunderstorms", and good call by Ryan not to tell Ryemi, she's definitely too shy to handle it well. Sounds like our young goddess really needs to have a long talk with Ren (or at least with her parents) to get her feelings sorted out.

Side question out of personal curiosity: I wonder if all those bodily fluids from Ryemi have any...use? There seems to be an awful lot of that stuff after all.

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