Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2026 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Theresa's POV

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Derpywolf647 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2025 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Theresa's POV

Great job! The aspect of someone who once cared greatly, losing that care adds a good level of cruelty to the story. A personal taste would like to see it from the Terry's point of view, but it is still a great read!