Reviews For A Rivals Reduction
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Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2025 1:31 AM Title: Along Came a Spider

Still waiting for a reply when you can on my question.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2025 6:42 PM Title: A Spider's Web is Never Spun

Another fun chapter! Loved Peter's adventure in Magik's mouth and Galacta's punishment for the losing team. Imagining the size of Galacta compared to him at the moment is pretty awe-inspiring.



Author's Response:

Gotta give some credit to Zuxby for the Magik idea lol. It was definitely fun to bring Galacta into the equation. I'm not sure I've ever written that level of scale before.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2025 11:50 AM Title: A Spider's Web is Never Spun

Nice stuff, though really hoping this story could continue for longer.


Either way, do you take story requests? If so, how can I contact you? The contact option on here is broken.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Originally I only conceived of it as a one shot but it grew into 3 parts.

As for requests I'm not really open to them right now. I have other stuff I wanna work on before I could commit to it. 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2025 8:06 AM Title: Round Two! FIGHT!

Fun story! I haven't played the game but I know the characters from the comics. You've done a good job capturing their personalities. 



Author's Response:

Sir Pixis! It's been really enjoyable to write so I'm glad that comes thru to the reader. I tried to work in the settings and dynamics of the game while infusing character details from the comics/movies/TV shows. I'm a longtime fan of your writing so I really appreciate the praise! 

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2025 4:26 PM Title: Along Came a Spider

Amazing stuff! Any chance of some inner body stuff like up the butt, in someone’s mouth or stomach later on?



Author's Response:

Peter's definitely headed for a mouth-based encounter with where chapter 2 leaves off. Thanks for the rating!

Reviewer: Aldo121319 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2025 12:38 PM Title: Along Came a Spider

Really fun story! I’m particularly impressed by how you were able to get the personality of each of the women that Peter interacts with to shine through so distinctly in such a short space of time allocated to each of them, particularly Hela, Sue and Doreen!

As other have already said, I’m not sure if you plan to continue this, but I know my imagination is already racing with thoughts about where this could go! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! As a long time Marvel fan it was fun to write all the characters. I am working on the 2nd part so stay tuned!

Reviewer: LeopoldArchitect Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2025 11:58 AM Title: Along Came a Spider

Fun read! Glad I'm not the only one in awe at how absurdly gargantuan they made Emma's ass in Rivals lmao. I didn't think they'd one-up Sue so quickly, yet here we are.

I don't know if you plan on continuing this or leaving it like this, but either way I enjoyed it a lot :) 



Author's Response:

I think everyone was stunned. The artists clearly love a curvy blonde lmao. Glad to hear you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2025 8:17 PM Title: Along Came a Spider

No boot stomp? Shame. Kinda curious to see where this is going, ngl.

And I don't JUST mean Emma's booty.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Emma's probably my main inspiration for writing this so we're definitely gonna see more of her lol 

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