Reviews For The Broken
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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2026 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Crumbling

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Kira Dropana Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2025 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Collecting

This one strikes close to home, definitely curious where you're going from here and if you're gonna be giving each girl their own chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2025 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Crumbling

Wow! Very interesting concept. This feels like a person that has had trauma in their life and this is their mind having enough and breaking. I am very interested to see where you take this unique story. Very fascinating. 

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