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Reviewer: kongoboy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2025 5:22 AM Title: A Man, A Witch, and A Problem

Wow this is such a Hot and addictive story already! You’ve done a magnificent job with this one! I really hope you’re going to start another chapter soon, I’m really into this one now!

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Date: April 23 2025 5:13 AM Title: A Man, A Witch, and A Problem

The word "Feedback" leaves room for some great vore punning. 

But the only negative thing I can think of is the use of magic instead of science, not my personal preference. This has been by far the most enjoyable story I've found on here for several years, with lots of delightfully clean soft vore description. I love Sam's sense of mischief. I am wondering about one thing. After being shrunken, he describes smells of lip gloss and strawberries. Yet before the shrinking, early in the story, they seem to be smoking joints. Wouldn't this leave a substance smell in her mouth even more detectable to a shrunken guy inside it?  Loving this story. Is there going to be more, given the potential with Austin now stuck at tiny size?



Author's Response:

Absolutely more is coming! And about smell. Smell is very particular to me. So often  in a vore scene the bad smell of a mouth, which is normal, is discussed. I much prefer either no smell or a pleasant smell. It isn't realistic, but a negative odor just ruins it for me. 

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