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Reviewer: Tiny_T3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2025 4:59 PM Title: Absent-Minded Carnage

This is really well written love the buildups and the flow of it all, switching between perspectives like that.

Author's Response:

thank you so much! I do love to change the focal point and I am glad it works well

Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2025 7:46 AM Title: Absent-Minded Carnage

Nice story and great build up as well as all the short bios of all the people who were killed. 

Don't you hate it when shrinking devices end up in the wrong hands, lol



Author's Response:

thank you very much! I certainly think these scenarios are more enjoyable when there's at least a little characterization happening :p

and yes! keep an eye on your shrinking device!

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