Hello!

I was browsing for new stories to read on the site and found this neat little piece. Oh boy! After finishing the latest chapter, I immediately went back to read The Origin 1 and 2 and the side stories.

This is an amazing universe you have built! This is one of the serieses on the site that really tells stories in such a grand scale (pun intended hehe), I am afraid only a few series rival it. Just amazing characters that makes me want to invest in! Looking forward to this new story unfolding!

p.s. I saw The Origin showing up in Most Recent a lot of times actually but I wasn't interested until I found out there's these anime images that help visualize these stories and oh, they really enhance the experience!

Great to see you back, the GOAT returns. I will leave a review on after stories as well. Anyway looks like an interesting start. Its funny how Ryemi went from wanting to find a planet for everyone and shrink down to not only still being a living planet millions of years later but also getting other goddesses involved as well. We did see Ren forming Ryemis religion in the after story chapter and now shes known as the Grand Goddess so I'm assuming the religion really took of lmao.

I am definitely curious about the events that happened in between, like did Ryemi eventually manage to shrink down, and then realize she actually liked being a living planet or has she just been like this the entire time. Also I did a double take when I saw the name Amara. Since she lost her power, I'm assuming Ryemi just grew her to 100 000 km tall and Ryemi is probably the one growing the other goddesses as well. Amara did have humans living on her before, but those were for her breast milk experiments where humans were transformed but shes mellowed out since then.

Still being a living planet means they can't really move around much, they just have to stay floating in space. Though I guess Amara gets her scientific fulfillment from watching a planet develop on her body rather than  researching. I'm still surprised so many goddesses went for this, considering the last chapter of Origin 2 was basically Ryemi saying how much of a burden being a living planet was lol.

I am curious to see what Ryemi is like in this story, now that she is millions of years old. I wonder if Ren and Ryan are still around, Ryemi could probably have stopped their aging. Also Mimi is millions of years old so she likely has her domain at full potential so she might have the power of creation and so could do things even Ryemi can't. Since Ryemi is limited by what she can exactly imagine but Genesis was able to create goddesses with abilities that even Genesis didn't have so Mimi might be able to do the same maybe.

I have really enjoyed your stories, In my opinion, I think you are a fantastic writer. I have gotten really invested in the world and the characters. I've never felt that the chapters were too long or dragged, if anything even with long chapters I just want to read even more, though those cliff hangers you sometimes use probably contributed to that feeling lol.

Since you mentioned other stories, does that include a story set in the dark Mimi timeline? Im a big fan of that ending. Also since you don't have the name in brackets in the chapter titles, does that mean this whole story is going to be Sarahs point of view

Anyway this looks like a great start, im curious to see what exactly goddess school entails and how Ryemi even got this idea in the first place and to learn more about Sarah. Is she a nice girl like Ryemi or a secret freak like Mimi lmao.