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Reviewer: RedEye21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2025 9:06 PM Title: Freddy

The shrunken person may be a man who only criticizes, judges, and believes that he is always right about everything, and that he is never wrong.

Reviewer: Lumberpanda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2025 3:48 AM Title: Freddy

Enjoying this so far! Keep it up! 

Here’s one idea (doesn’t have to be this particular story but in the same vain): a man at the restaurant is grossed out by a woman breastfeeding their baby and makes a huge scene to the point where the woman leaves feeling embarrassed and humiliated. Joanna gets revenge by shrinking the man down and then depositing him in one of her coworkers bottles used for their breast pump. The coworker uses the breast pump on their break and the man is soon trying to stay afloat in her breast milk. The coworker then goes home at the end of their shift, taking their pumped milk with them to give to their baby. 



Author's Response:

Well, that could be done. But I might be selective on what’s written. Personally, not super comfortable having kids in these kinds of stories. If I did write this, it might end up more vague.

Reviewer: Flagpole_Sitta97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2025 8:33 PM Title: Freddy

I like the concept very much and I'll be watching eagerly as you upload more, and I LOVE the way you talk about internal scenes too. Very detailed. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: RedEye21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2025 5:35 PM Title: Bradley

Very good chapter, what if the next dish was a lasagna? And the client was a strict woman who works as an urban life planner



Author's Response:

Any requests on the shrunken person?

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