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I like how she explain to  the two of them. How they have made things worse. Looking forward to the next chapter 

I like how she explain to  the two of them. How they have made things worse. Looking forward to the next chapter 

Wow it has been a while. thank for the update.

If she gets anything close to a normal life I think she needs to rethink who her friend should be 

Good chapter. 

This is such a great story. Original idea for how the size change works, and boy does it work! Well-written too, please keep it up!
P.s. the height charts are a good idea for keeping track of what is going on

We are so back.  Excited to see where you take this, Thanks for continuing the story!

I wonder what Chloe’s next move is, if she appears tiny and how far she pushes things. I love your little agent of chaos. 

Great update. Thank you.

Great chapter 

Thanks for responding to my last review Bordeaux! I appreciate the optimization problem you left me.

Your Calculations

Unfortunately, while trying to solve it, I discovered errors in your calculations for chapter six, displayed in a thought bubble above Sarah. You mistakenly use the formula for exponential decay rather than exponential growth, then you miscalculate 174 / 17.4. Despite all this, the number of trips you come up with is only 1,000 trips shy of what I calculated.

Exponential Growth: y = a(1 + r) ^ t

Exponential Decay: y = a(1 - r) ^ t

My Calculations

My last review correctly implies that exponential growth models an object’s increase in size, but it also assumes that objects decreasing in size follow exponential decay. This is wildly incorrect since, after one day, 1 – r would be less than zero, making the object’s final size negative. Instead, a working formula can be derived by swapping final size and initial size in the growth formula, then solving for final size.

IH = FH(1 + PD) ^ Trips

IH / FH = (1 + PD) ^ Trips

FH / IH = 1 / ((1 + PD) ^ Trips)

Shrink Formula: FH = IH / ((1 + PD) ^ Trips)

Growth Formula: FH = IH(1 + r) ^ Trips

Initial Height = IH, Final Height = FH, Portal Delay (in days) = PD

Optimal Growth

Suppose I have a perfect cube and two circular portals, where the diameter of the first portal equals the side lengths of the cube. I can pass this cube through the first portal only once before it becomes too big to fit. To keep growing, I need to reset the portal timer, but how long should I wait for optimal growth? The simple answer is that the optimal reset time is the time needed to outgrow a portal. This depends on factors such as growth speed, number of trips, time needed to take each trip, and an object’s proportions. This can be partially visualized by graphing the growth formula. 

If the first portal’s length is equal to that of the object passing through it, then an object’s proportions, or aspect ratio, would increase the number of possible trips per portal reset. A cube can only fit through the portal once, but a person could pass through several times. The higher an object’s proportions, or aspect ratio, the faster its growth rate will be. 

I spent way too long on this.