April as a Goddess should have control over her subjects shrinking.

Just seems fair.

April really is the best big sis in the world.

Too much exposition is a problem I always face when trying to write a story, so I admire those who can write concisely, directly, without compromising the quality of the storytelling and its characters. And April is such a endearing character. You just can’t hate her because she is not evil, she is just stupid. An idiot, but not a bad sister. She thanks Billy for caring for her feet and, as I said before, I think that is the point: she is just too happy and elated her brother seems to like her and especially her feet (elated… here is another word I think April would strugle with kkkkk).

I think if Billy just try to relax and think clearly he might enjoy bonding with April. Didn’t April fanced herself a princess? And didn’t he observed she isn’t very good at taking care of her foot? He could play along and offer to clean and paint her toes, to be, not just any servant... her feet's knight/hero! Doing it maybe hard but it would make her feet less smelly while also making April even more happy with him and, therefore, more inclined to listen.

Again, thanks for writing and sharing!

PS.: some work came up and I might not be able to comment as much TT_TT 

Author's Response:

Thanks for another great review!

April may be slightly more evil than you think, so I hope the planned upcoming chapters don't turn you away from the story haha. I do like this dynamic though and if I write stories in the future I might return to it because it's more fun to write than I thought.

No worries if you don't get around to leaving further comments, I just hope you are able to keeping following along with the story when you have time and enjoy what comes next.

I like this kind of direct style where you jump right into action, but also foreshadows a lot of possible developments – like the shooting star: maybe April wished for something, but what? She would probably answer 'uh duh, it’s a shrinking story, so I must have asked for my stupid older brother to get smaller than me’… Well, yes, that is a possibility, but hear me out. April didn’t seem to have any issues with her or Billy’s height. What she seems self aware about is her foot smell. So, what if her wish was to meet someone who isn’t, like, a total ass and like… likes her feet? (Yeah, I am trying to mimic gen Z speech… and failling, I know TT_TT).

Anyway, my point is: this would explain why she had no idea why Billy shrank, but was so inclined to conclude he had done it because he liked her feet... and also why she became so ecstatic and eager to oblige to his "pervo dream" - because it's not his, it's her wish coming true.

As much as April is an obnoxious bratty, but I like this kind of character because all the attitude is usually to hide other parts of our personality we don’t want others – especially family – picking up.

I am invested and eagerly waiting for more. Thanks for sharing your writing with us and sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

I love stories that keep the main character above a couple inches in height and underfoot. Hoping to see both unaware/aware inshoe from April.

Love these kinds of stories. Is it going to be entirely foot focused?