[Report This]Date: August 13 2025 3:22 PM Title: Dinner Party
Amazing work as always! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Been making some good progress with the next one! :)
[Report This]Date: July 02 2025 8:41 AM Title: Dinner Party
Absolutely amazing story. I just made an account only to give you feedback. I always really enjoy your work but haven´t commented so far, like a lot of people I reckon. So don´t be dissuaded by a lack of direct feedback, I think a lot of people love your stories :)
This one feels especially great though!
The storyline is great, I love the different characters and how many there are. And I especially love the casual and uninterested way the women swallow dozens of tinies, mocking them but not in a sadistic way, but in a playfully chill way.
This just shows even more the absolutely different situations these people are in (depending on if you are a shrinkie or not) and how powerful these giantess are, while not even really thinking about the devastating actions they are taking, because the tinies are just considered food and sometimes a pleasant distraction.
I loved when one character playfully said : "Somebody is gonna have to step up" , while patting her belly. I think the dialogue was really creative and different. It´s crazy how you keep being fresh with all the stories you have already done.
I could really feel the sense of unfairness and the absolute power these women exerted. This sense of being nothing but food for these giantess and living through this nightmare , while they casually enjoy their party comes across so well.
I generally really appreciate the way you approached this story, I could really feel the dread of being digested, especially when you listen to the gigantic woman you are in, having to go to the bathroom. It really makes the point come across so well, really good.
So many different perspectives and therefore so many little interesting stories, it was just great!
I love how the giantess don´t even care about the tinies in their stomach and don´t really think about them, but sometimes I wish that some giantess would be a bit more aware of the tinies being digested in them and actively mock them a bit more in this playful funny way you do so well, especially if the thought crosses their mind what will eventually happen to the tinies they swallowed. I promise you that isn´t criticism in any form, it´s just what I really enjoy. I think it´s good that you write the stories that You enjoy, because they´ve been amazing :)
Thanks again for your hard work, I looked at your page every week before this story came out and I´ll keep doing that in the future. I know these things are hard,so take your time, I am really looking forward to your next story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I can only repeat that it always makes me very happy when I get encouraging reviews like this - though I realise my stories are a bit niche, even within the GTS/vore context. I know they are relatively dark and disturbing, so they're simply not everyone's cup of tea.
I'm glad that you found this one particularly enjoyable, though. When I write these, I alway feel like I am being super repetitive and just regurgitating the same thing over and over with slightly different variations. Then again, I guess I am, given the nature of these stories, but I'm happy it at least doesn't feel like like boring copy-paste to those who read my stories! :)
There was some experimenting with interaction between bigs and tinies here, though, as you already said, not in the overtly sadistic way that you see with characters like Tanja or Hannah. I tend to write very little to no interaction between preds and prey, generally speaking, because it makes more sense to me within the context of the universe. People normally don't talk to their food either, after all, and shrinkies are simply food in that world. But I also know most readers like it when there's some "personal" element between them. I tried to compromise here and am glad to hear that it works.
I will try to add a bit more of this kind mild mocking and off-hand comments towards shrinkies. And then, of course, there's also going to be stories with characters like Hannah and Tanja again in the future where there will be much more extensive interaction between bigs and tinies! ;)
Again, thank you very much for your comment, my friend! You brought a smile to my face.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2025 8:37 AM Title: Dinner Party
I knew it was well worth the wait since I think this is your biggest story yet.
I'm gonna to have a field day for the rest of the week and over the weekend reading this :)
Author's Response:
It is! :) Both in word count and I think just in the whole complexity of it, with quite a lot of different characters all interacting with each other. A fair amount of them are also new or at least didn't have much of an appearance yet.
Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: June 01 2025 11:25 AM Title: Dinner Party
LEGEND IS BACK!!!
Welcome back vortex:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I hope you enjoy the story!