Date: February 07 2026 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting the rival team
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.
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Date: July 01 2025 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting the rival team
Loveeeeee this story, would love to see more of this world or what might happen to the boy's during their game
Author's Response: Yeah, I plan on writing more stories in this setting, I enjoy worldbuilding and have many ideas in a multi size world like this. As for the boys' game, that's definitely something I might write at some point.
Date: July 01 2025 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting the rival team
This is easily one of my favorite stories on this site. I love it when tinies are optimistic and hopeful about their chances just to get a reality check by someone much larger. I'm also glad nobody died. I feel for the girls.
Author's Response: Thank you, reviews like this mean a lot to me! I wanted to drive home the unfairness of it all, and have the reader put themselves in their situation. Happy you liked it!
Date: June 30 2025 4:00 PM Title: Epilogue
Surprisingly optimistic ending. Great story
Author's Response: Thank you! I wondered how I wanted to end the story. Wanted it to be a dark but not totally bleak ending.
Date: June 04 2025 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting the rival team
I love these kinds of stories, can't wait for the next chapter. Rival girl sports is great when one side is gigantic.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Episode 2 and the epilogue are up!