Reviews For Rise and Fall
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Reviewer: miniscule Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2025 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I usually don't bother logging in when I read the material on this site. I did just that in order to review this story. 

Lexi is hot. She drips hot. Her assertion and dominance are part of the formula. Her dialogue seals it. Telling Sig exactly what's going to happen is a mix of information and threat. But it might also be related to her knowing that Sig gets off on that type of language. Maybe she's just being a good friend by pretending to be mean, choosing to speak this way in order to please Sig. Or maybe she's really just getting off on being mean to Sig. Either way, it's great. 

Sig loves getting in the center of everything between Lexi and "The Man" or "Big Boy" or whatever his name is. It's great that he doesn't even get named in the story. The anonymity makes him seem more threatening. Or that he could be replaced by any of a number of men in Lexi's contacts, as Lexi threatens at the end of chapter 3.

This story is amazing. I wish it would continue. It seems like Sig is happy enough. Why? What's in his head? What's in Lexi's head?

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