Thank you so much I really appreciate that!
I was actually thinking of this as a segment from a longer journey with these characters and was kind of testing the waters to see how it felt on its own. Still deciding whether to keep going from here or take a step back and build something more in-depth from the beginning, but either way, I’d love to keep this moment as part of the arc and maybe do some adjustments to style or focus based on feedback. Super glad it landed with you!