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Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 01 2025 11:39 PM Title: Signing Off

I don't know whether my previous review either influenced how this story ended or if I just made a somewhat lucky guess in how it was going to end. I kinda figured that in order for Kate to survive an onslaught of military armaments making impact with her body, she'd have to grow to such an extent that the explosions would feel like little more than pinpricks or insect bites. This scene reminds me of the last few chapters of the story "Growing Closer" by saltavio or the near end of the story "Giganti" by LBP.

I'm a little surprised that you have Kate still retaining her humanity (more or less) at the end of the story, though I understand that her doing otherwise might make you feel compelled to remove the "gentle" tag to the story. I kinda figured that Kate would see herself as truly god-like, now that she's unfathomably tall, potentially indestructible, and doesn't even need to worry about asphyxiation as she stands at the uppermost ends of the planet's atmosphere, oxygen levels being low as they are at such an elevation. I'd wager that there are those who would think "I am invincible!" at such a revelation, figuring that they would no longer have to answer to the rules of society anymore and doing as they please, no matter how much death and destruction occurs in the process. So I found it mildly surprising that even with such a growth spurt that Kate still felt the need to restrain herself to some extent, not giving into the temptation of having so much raw, destructive power now.

In any case, this was an amusing little closer to the story. Here are the links to the two aforementioned stories if you haven't read either by chance, in case you're interested in reading either one.

"Growing Closer" by saltavio: https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=13868&index=1

"Gigantic" by LBP: http://mg-sg.pbworks.com/w/page/5824852/Giganti%20By%20LBP




Author's Response:

I talked about the ending of the story a little bit more in my "short story collection" over on GiantessCity, so you can see a bit of a timeline on the story's development there. I think it would be fair to say your comments on the worldbuilding did steer me to address that aspect a little more, but overall most of your predictions were accurate to my outline and I was just holding back from spoilers in responding to reviews. I'm not sure if that's a reflection of your perceptiveness as a reader, my ability to foreshadow things as an author, or simply a manifestation of our common interests. The plan was always for Kate to grow bigger, but I deliberated about what she would do when she became bigger. Ultimately, I landed on a more open-ended conclusion that preserved her character development rather than an abrupt heel turn in which she goes full megalomaniac. While Kate is definitely an egotistical person, she is not a narcissist (who can rely solely upon self-validation) and she craves the attention and adoration of others so she isn't callously cruel to them. I originally had a more spiteful ending in mind, but I ultimately felt the heel turn wasn't justified by the events of the story and Kate's character arc, as she does gradually become more conscientious over the course of the narrative.

Minor tangent/detail: while the troposphere (and Earth's oxygen) ends at 10 miles in altitude, humans typically require assistance breathing at around 10-15k feet in elevation. It is very subtle within the story, but Kate's temporary breathing difficulties are actually psychological, not physical. Realistically, she should have started suffocating well before she even reached the altitude of the aircraft, not that readers should necessarily expect "realism" in mega giantess stories. In other words, she struggles to breathe because she thinks she can't breathe, which is also a common affliction in skydiving and panic attacks. Anyway, her second growth spurt basically renders her immune to asphyxiation, as well as potentially other mortal necessities. It's not explicitly addressed whether she needs food, water, etc. within the story, though, and I decided to leave that ambiguous for the reader. Once I slap a "completed" sticked on my stories, it's up to the reader to create his own headcanon if he wants it to continue. Maybe Kate gets bored and just started destroying things for her own entertainment. Maybe she starves to death. Maybe she actually goes on a conquest of the globe or some kind of world tour. People can make what they want of it.

I actually have read "Growing Closer" and upon my initial reading it was one of my all-time favorite stories in the genre. The early character work, logistics, and story beats are fantastic and I wholeheartedly adore it. When the story was still being released, I was totally hooked on it and looked forward to every new chapter posted on Friday evenings. Unfortunately, I feel like the story eventually "outgrew" its initial premise and it really shows in the latter half of the story. All of the logistics Saltavio set up fell away as the growth was explained to be "destiny" (magic), despite very real early struggles with things like hunger earlier in the story. The courthouse arc was fairly contrived and the first attack on Trish, while an intriguing bit of action that raised the stakes, ends up being retconned by events later in the story. Like, a bomb blows off her arm in the first act, but then she's apparently totally comfortable eating WMDs and standing in (relatively) close proximity to her family as they explode inside her, miraculously leaving her completely unharmed and the explosion entirely contained within her stomach. Not to mention the use of nuclear AND biological weapons is just so stupid that it immensely diminished my immersion, even on my first read. I don't like retcons. It's one thing to introduce a question or an assumption to mislead the reader, but it's entirely another to blatantly contradict prior events in the story. 

I'll refrain from further nitpicking, but suffice it to say I am often frustrated by Saltavio's writing. He creates really interesting characters and his descriptions and dialogue are excellent, but he struggles to stay true to his themes and deliver satisfying endings for me. "Lover's Lagoon" has a similar problem, but it did a much better job than "Growing Closer" and only started to fall apart in the final chapters. None of this is to throw shade, as I know endings are extremely difficult to write and I changed my planned ending for this story twice before finally settling on the one I posted (which still has problems for me). This is just a personal pet peeve of mine with the genre as a whole. Growth causes megalomania in well-adjusted adults, nukes cause growth for no reason, military aircraft strafe giant women as unsafe altitudes, etc.

I have not read "Gigantic," but I'll add a bookmark on my phone. I've got a lot of reading I plan to do during my hiatus, including finishing Rowena (which was a GREAT recommendation, btw). In recent weeks my reading has taken a backseat to my writing as I've worked to wrap up all of the stories I had committed to writing before I go, but I believe an author has to both read and write to stay sharp. Feel free to DM me any other story recommendations, too. 

Reviewer: GreenDune Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2025 10:09 PM Title: Signing Off

Sorry to hear that you are taking a hiatus! I've really enjoyed your stories, including this one. I look forward to the story you've got next and whatever stories you make when you hopefully return.



Author's Response:

Thank you! You've got a real knack for writing yourself so I'm sure you'll do a good job in filling the gap for the community. I don't know if you just started writing in the last few weeks or if you only just started posting here, but you're starting from a much better place than I did seven months ago and I'm sure you'll continue posting great stories. I'll be reading them when I can.

I'm glad this story worked for you and others. To be honest, I wasn't entirely sure I'd be able to pull off a "gentle rampage" with a character at such a large size, but I always try to challenge myself. Perhaps when I get back, I'll start writing stories with more modestly-sized giantesses. As I've mentioned in a few places, all of these stories have been experiments in service to my epic novel, so writing sizes I've already surpassed in that story didn't really serve my purposes of exploring giantesses of larger dimensions and higher perspectives. That said, I do really like the smaller scales you've been working with and I'm hoping to tackle them eventually for myself.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2025 8:37 PM Title: The Interview

Glad that Ellis is alive, and kinda surprised that he jumped into the story the way that he did. I guess that goes to show how much he values his relationship with Kate that he's willing to give her a heads-up as to what's coming. Also curious as to whether or not Kate is indeed indestructible, depending on what the military is going to do in the final chapter.

One potential hypothetical: Air force drops a tactical nuke on Kate, hoping it's enough firepower to kill her, only for her body to instead absorb all of the thermonuclear, radioactive energy and possibly grow even larger in the process (maybe a mile high or greater), with pretty much sets the record straight as to how powerful she is, making the US federal government - and the entire planet by extension - cower in fear, knowing she's now by far the most powerful force on the planet, essentially a living goddess. While Kate is tempted to show the world what she is capable of, she (miraculously) doesn't let it go to her head and still keeps herself in check, even though it'll be much harder for her to live in a world where everyone and everything around her is now borderline microscopic in comparison. Of course, she'd have to no longer need food, water, or any other outside sources of sustenance to survive at such a size, otherwise she'd strip the planet bare of resources in a relatively short amount of time.

Of course, it's just a hypothetical prediction. You might have something entirely different planned altogether. In any case, I'm curious as to what ending you have in mind for this story.



Author's Response:

Not saying you're right or wrong, but I have very mixed feelings about the "giantess grows with nukes" trope. On the one hand: I like growth. On the other hand, it's usually a deus ex machina that isn't really set up at all in the story. I believe the trope is borrowed from a Godzilla fan theory, but now it's become so ubiquitous that people don't even really question it anymore. A lot of size fans are just content to accept "Oh, the giantess got nuked, so she'll grow bigger."  It would be one thing if (like Godzilla) the giantess were established to absorb radiation or energy earlier in the story, but this usually isn't the case.

Tangent aside, I did somewhat foreshadow the ending to avoid the deus ex machina. I think it will be thematically satisfying, but probably won't resolve every one of the story's questions. I like surprises, but I resent lazy writing wherein the author writes himself into a corner and then invents a way out of it. I don't think everything needs to be explained to the reader in exhaustive detail. I don't think the reader needs to understand everything within a story, too. But it's really disappointing when the ending is completely unpredictable due to not being set up at all. For instance, the abrupt reappearance of Ellis is something I was definitely planning from the beginning, which is why I referenced him a few times in later chapters, but he also seems to come out of nowhere. I had a little side story in my head for how it happened, but I decided not to include it in the narrative itself because (1) it would make the big reveal way too obvious and (2) it just didn't fit well with the rest of the story. So Ellis reappears suddenly, but he was always in the background of Kate's mind (along with the reader's). If I had just had Ellis disappear in Chapter 2 and then show up again in Chapter 6 at the climax of the story, it would feel pretty cheap. So she thinks about him from time to time. It's also not like he's "saving the day" or anything, but his existence will affect the ending.

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing again. I'm planning to have the final chapter out either later this evening or more likely tomorrow afternoon, depending on how quickly I write it and how long I want to sit with it. to contemplate improvements.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2025 11:18 PM Title: Sports!

Amused at the overall tone of this story so far. Kate's mindset seems to swing back-and-forth like a pendulum over how she should perceive these events and process them accordingly: Should she embrace her godlike power and do as she pleases, regardless of what others think or how much damage she creates in the process, or should she show restraint and at least some degree of consideration towards others, whether it's out of some sense of human compassion or because she doesn't want to risk a potential military response as a consequence? You have her teetering back-and-forth between both ends, like an internal raging tempest of how Kate should see herself in all of these things, especially with how she interacts with her (former) superiors back at the news station.

Curious as to what the endgame in all of this is. If Kate ends up returning to her original size, she's going to have a lot of explaining to do, both to the city of San Antonio itself and maybe even to the US federal government by extension. In a way, it might be beneficial for her to stay gigantic, if for no other reason that the government might be reluctant to punish her if she's unfathomably gigantic and therefore quite powerful (only a full-on military strike might be enough to defeat her at this point). Of course, if she's permanently gigantic, there'd be logistical issues like adequate food, water, clothing, housing, going to the bathroom, etc. Maybe you already have things like that in mind; just something for consideration within the broader endgame of this story.

Also curious if Ellis is indeed still alive. It crossed my mind that maybe Kate's superiors back at the news station lied to her and Ellis indeed actually died during Kate's growth spurt. Maybe they did so to spare Kate the emotional turmoil and guilt of (accidentally) killing him in the process, worried that Kate might fly into a rage and destroy everything in her path as a result. Given that you addressed this somewhat in this chapter, it makes me wonder if the reader will hear about Ellis's fate again in this story. Personally, I'm hoping he's indeed alive, but don't let that opinion govern his part in this story. I imagine it would make for an interesting emotional twist on Kate's part if she found out that she did indeed kill him (again, accidentally) and how she'd process that turn of events in all of this.

In any case, good stuff so far and curious how this story ends. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Recent events have had me fairly busy, but I'm expecting to post the penultimate chapter in the very near future and have the grand finale posted a day or two later. I think people will enjoy the endgame, but it probably won't answer every question I've set up. This is still a self-contained short story and I didn't put too much importance on the worldbuilding for this particular project, so things like the cause of Kate's growth and the logistics of her massive upkeep won't really be addressed. That is something I took the time to do because of the premise of The Farmer's Daughter and will be explained in time with Tipsy Titaness (it's part of the mystery element in that story), but I don't really concern myself with the explanations in shorter stories like this one. I was much more focused on the themes and central character of this story, though people are of course invited to come up with their own headcanon. I do have some short story ideas that are more focused on the cause of the growth or the logistics of the giantess, but I don't anticipate tackling any of those in the near future. 

Kate's character is something I'm having fun with. She's definitely ambitious and power-hungry, but she isn't malicious or cruel. Playful, perhaps. Self-absorbed, certainly. But she does exercise restraint. It's becoming a bit of a trope of mine that the giantesses in my stories don't really appreciate their own strength, but I also think that's just realistically what would happen. She's causing more destruction than she needs to and she is somewhat conscious of that fact, but she doesn't really understand the scope of the devastation she inflicts. Things like how fast she's moving or how much she's shaking the ground aren't really registering for her, but at the same time she does know when she's being self-indulgent (like when she needlessly steps on a highway or stomps back into the city). I think it was only with the most recent chapter that she's started to recognize the consequences of her actions and begun thinking more broadly about how the world perceives her.

Anyway, I've got the rest of the story outlined and I only have to write a sliver of the penultimate chapter left. I think pretty much everything else you've mentioned will be addressed by the end of the final chapter, though I'm not sure how satisfying it will be (everybody wants different things out of stories and I'm still experimenting myself). I think it will put a nice little bow on things while still leaving some room for speculation.

Reviewer: ItsKeine Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 22 2025 5:22 AM Title: Sports!

Ah, Kate's starting to give in to her arousal, just a little bit. I like that~ Very good!

Here's hoping by the end she's bouncing herself on a suitable skyscraper!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I don't want to spoil anything, as I'm hoping to have this story finished in the next few days, so I won't be commenting on future events.
I do anticipate posting a pretty erotic story this week, though, so stay tuned for that. 
In the meantime, you might want to check out my other stories, "The Boob Job" or "Psycho Bitch."
They're not "smut," per se, but they're definitely sensual and involve big girls getting off on their size and strength. 

Reviewer: ItsKeine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2025 7:07 AM Title: Traffic Report

Not bad, not bad at all. 

Kate's a surprisingly fun personality. I appreciate she is making some effort to minimize carnage, and direct it toward the more deserving.

Honestly, though, I'd say let her get turned on, and let her indulge in it. She deserves a big climax. 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.
To be honest, we're only slightly more than halfway through the story, so any "big climax" will be arriving a little later. I do have one in mind.
That said, I'm not sure that a smutty, erotic rampage is really appropriate for the character or story. Kate's definitely getting off on her power, but she's also a professional who cares about outward appearances.
However, as time goes on, she does seem to be getting less and less concerned about the opinions of the little people...
For what it's worth, I do have a very smutty story that I'm hoping to finish and post on the weekend, so stay tuned. 

Reviewer: Giant Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2025 10:38 PM Title: A Rising Star

It's great to see someone doing this kind of gentle stories, where it's not just "she does nothing", "she hates being big" or "it's called gentle but is about slavery", haha. I like seeing when they're  large and in charge, but not evil for no reason. Your stories have extremely huge ego characters that are nevertheless good people having fun power trips, and I love that.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. I haven't seen the concept of a "gentle rampage" tackled too often, so I wanted to give it a shot. 
This story is doing a lot of things at once and definitely has a complex character at its heart. Kate is quite a character, as she isn't "mean" but is definitely self-absorbed. She's walking a lot of fine lines and her motivations are shifty because of how excited she is as she explores her new circumstances. She's an ambitious, power-hungry girl who has just been handed a fantasy beyond anything she had never even imagined for herself. She's very much overwhelmed about getting everything she's ever wanted and more all at once, especially in the wake of years of diligence that didn't seem to be paying off. That's how it goes for a lot of people in the media and entertainment industry. Lots of long, hard work and then a sudden breakthrough into the mainstream seemingly coming from out of nowhere. 
Once again, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There's more to come!

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