Reviewer: Thousandaire Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2025 7:00 PM Title: Treading Water

Absolutely peak writing. Poor Ian! I really hope he gets some rest after all of this haha

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2025 8:51 PM Title: Arrival

Tiffany is such a great character, dominating the big and the small. I wonder what she would be like if she was the one that became big. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!

I can't imagine the horrors the island would face if she was the one in charge.

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2025 6:51 PM Title: On The Ferry

Absolutely loved this chapter, great to see Tiffany getting her way. 
As a side note, will Ians family ever come back to the story?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!

After a few days on the island, we will check back on his family in a bit to see how they're doing.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2025 7:01 PM Title: Graduation

Really loved this chapter. I cant wait to see what Amy looks like to Ian. I'm hoping amy and Ian finally get acquainted soon. A relationship between two people with such a scale difference is bound to be extremely entertaining. Love Amy and Ian and hope to see more!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the support.

I hope you get your wish soon!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2025 3:34 PM Title: Prologue

Love this story! Can't say the same about the drawings XD

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Thanks for the support!

I'll try to do better for the images.

Reviewer: 12345678910 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2025 12:13 PM Title: Graduation

I could tell you that I really like the story, but the fact I made this account just to write this review should tell you enough. Well done.

This story has me constantly on edge, really curious to see Amy interact with Ian in the future.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!

Amy will get her chance in the future for sure, but with such a size difference, who knows what will happen!

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2025 11:28 PM Title: Prologue

keep it up awesome so far

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Thank you for your comment.

I'll do my best to not disappoint!

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2025 10:19 AM Title: Adult Initiation Examination

Oh man, I was wondering how something would happen to Ian when there was no way of failing the test, I didn't think it would happen because of Amy.

So what I'm wondering about now is, how will people react and will they honestly believe he messed it up that bad? There's no way they wouldn't look into this since it has to look really suspicious, I'm guessing.

Either way, really invested in this one, it looks really promising so far. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Well, it is a dystopian society so things like appealing results may not be that easy regardless of the circumstances. But, it is indeed suspicious so perhaps the truth may come out after all. I'll try not to reveal too much details for now.

Hope you keep enjoying the story!

Reviewer: CHULBULLw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2025 7:32 AM Title: Adult Initiation Examination

The desks around her grew more restless; the faint tapping of pens, the furtive dart of eyes, the scratching of skin where nerves erupted in hives.

Wow, this line is some piece of art! It just simply impresses me to an entirely new level.

Also, why they did use pencils in the examinations like these. Mostly ball point pens are used, and for some important exams, Digital devices or computers are taken in use.

Anyway, this made room for easy cheating and the story to take this interesting turn. 

Hoping for new chapter again (I am too impatient I guess)

:)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

I did have to think hard about how to make the name swap possible even in a written test, due to the points you mentioned.

The best idea I could go for was having the character shade their names in those circles that some exams use, since the shading is usually done with pencil. (It's the kind of test, usually multiple choice test, where the paper has circles each corresponding to a number or letter, then you shade in your answers/your name. A machine then reads it through some optical recognition thing)

New chapter will come soon, hopefully.

Reviewer: CHULBULLw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2025 8:46 AM Title: The Night Before

Oh now, This chapter is telling me that although exam is based on Academics, but still any sort of question or problem can appear.

It can even Be only 2-3 questions with 100 of marks or thousands of questions, easy or difficult, related to studies or not.

This whole idea makes this exam frightful.

 Although Ian has almost no chance to loose, There might be something else waiting for him. On the other hand, Amy might end up bigger than her bully. 

Anything can happen from next chapters. However, I am also interested in the plot and story.

I hope all these chapters release as soon as possible. Oh Lord, I can't wait anymore. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the support!

I'll do my best to release the chapters quickly but I am working on other series at the same time as well. I'll keep to a regular schedule as much as possible.