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Reviewer: CHULBULLw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2025 8:01 AM Title: Prologue

Wow, I just read This story With patience, and IT IS AWESOME. The way you explain everything while progressing the story, introducing the characters, Things like SRP and AIP which seems too real. 

Almost you have almost nullified the gap between reality and this world.


Waiting For new chapters. :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind comment.

I hope you will continue to enjoy the progression of the story!

Reviewer: Evildictator Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2025 4:31 AM Title: Prologue

Good start, I like the concept. Interested to see where this goes



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

I put a lot of thought into planning this story, so I hope you will end up enjoying it.

Reviewer: CHULBULLw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2025 1:42 PM Title: Prologue

Please tell in advance the approx size of characters. Also, what have you thought abt Cheiri?




Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment.

As for what will happen to each character in terms of the SRP, I'd like to keep it a mystery for now. But we will be getting to that part really soon, so not to worry.

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2025 11:00 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting start. I like the idea of ​​a test that decides one's fate.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

This was an idea I wanted to work on for a while, and I finally found the inspiration to detail a proper plot around it. Expect a pretty long series.

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