Date: July 08 2025 1:34 PM Title: Marital Concerns
Welcome to the community!
I'm traveling right now and logistical challenges make leaving a longer review difficult, but I just wanted to congratulate you on taking the bold step into content creation.
A couple of suggestions based on what I've read:
1. Consider using the "chapter notes" to add content tags (and perhaps a brief summary of the premise?) for each short story. Outline things like the scale, characters, and any suggestive themes or warnings like "destruction," "vore," "humiliation," "New World Order," etc. These notes will also show up in the table of contents, making it easier for readers to browse what they like and likely boosting engagement.
2. I know these stories were created on the fly (I have my own low-effort stories, too), but I strongly advise that you reread each one a few hours after the initial writing period and try to replace words and phrases that you repeat frequently. I do this all the time when I write and my brain usually doesn't notice until I look over it with fresh eyes. There are a lot of places where you use the same word or phrase over and over and while not necessarily a flaw, your writing will improve with a greater variety of diction.
Anyway, it's always nice to see new writers dipping their toes into the water. Keep it up!