[Report This]Date: February 10 2026 12:21 AM Title: Marital Concerns
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
Date: February 07 2026 10:58 PM Title: Marital Concerns
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.
Discord: nebuladoodles
Email: luckiest297@gmail.com
Date: July 08 2025 1:34 PM Title: Marital Concerns
Welcome to the community!
I'm traveling right now and logistical challenges make leaving a longer review difficult, but I just wanted to congratulate you on taking the bold step into content creation.
A couple of suggestions based on what I've read:
1. Consider using the "chapter notes" to add content tags (and perhaps a brief summary of the premise?) for each short story. Outline things like the scale, characters, and any suggestive themes or warnings like "destruction," "vore," "humiliation," "New World Order," etc. These notes will also show up in the table of contents, making it easier for readers to browse what they like and likely boosting engagement.
2. I know these stories were created on the fly (I have my own low-effort stories, too), but I strongly advise that you reread each one a few hours after the initial writing period and try to replace words and phrases that you repeat frequently. I do this all the time when I write and my brain usually doesn't notice until I look over it with fresh eyes. There are a lot of places where you use the same word or phrase over and over and while not necessarily a flaw, your writing will improve with a greater variety of diction.
Anyway, it's always nice to see new writers dipping their toes into the water. Keep it up!