[Report This]Date: March 27 2026 4:13 PM Title: Part I
Great to see you back writing, I was worried you might have stopped! Did you plan to continue the Tourists stories, I think there was a Part 3 planned for The Andorran Queen?
Author's Response:
Yes, but don't know when! RN i'm focusing on commissions
[Report This]Date: March 25 2026 8:55 PM Title: Part II
Hello again (yeah),
Ok, so this is the second time writing a review, and of course it's part 2 of the story that made me make my account ^^'.
So let's start with a simple thank you for the continuation! Shout out to you and Jake.
And that's the first thing I like to point out: this feels like a continuation. The themes of humiliation, wholesomeness, and fucked-up toxicity are kept, but we also see a change in the characters and focus. Like, this story is spicy. Way more sexual than part one and not just a repeat of what we already had.
It also stays true to its strength. Representing a compelling story with good pacing and a mix of small and big scenes. I was really intrigued if Pete or lil toe would win the inner struggle and didn't expect a middle-of-the-road approach.
And then the actual finale. It was hinted at, but I just thought, This can't be. To be honest, as someone with ADHD and dyslexia, I can absolutely relate to lil toe. (Where is my ditsy, smelly feet, giantess owner?)
So if I get it right, there is a possibility for a part 3, right? I'm a bit curious how this is going further. With Pete now being an actual pet, we are probably going to miss out on some grumpy side notes on how he is forced to endure Ashley's idiocy, but otherwise I'm optimistic and hopeful for part 3! Who knows what we are going to explore next after Ashley's feet and ass!
All in all, a good part 2 that keeps true to its predecessor while not doing the same again. Really love it and still my favorite story out here! <3
Author's Response:
thanks for the long review! I'm sure you'll be happy to know that i'm currently working on a third (and final) part of the story, hope I can finish it soon! I can only confirm that Pete is gone, there's just Lil' Toe, and the consequences of that.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2026 9:24 PM Title: Part II
This story is incredible. Super great writing. And thanks Jake for bringing it back
[Report This]Date: October 30 2025 10:01 PM Title: Part I
Hey,
I was just revisiting some of my favorite stories and this was on top of it.
Sooo how is it with the sequel?
Kind regards <3
[Report This]Date: July 19 2025 9:51 AM Title: Part I
I find platonic relationships that later turn sexual somewhat really complex and interesting to write. Very interesting to note that he actually felt sorry for her at the end since she was shown to be desperate and lonely and accepted his fate of being a pet to his former friend with a sexual kink as well which is ironic given he didn't really find her attractive at normal size which really speaks of the situation and arousal can evolve over time in certain environments. I guess deep down he felt ashamed that he become somewhat conceited and too good for her. How the tables turn.
Mistaken identity where a tiny is mistaken as some random tiny human and not as themselves by a person they know is a really underused trope. Kudos for using it.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2025 11:25 AM Title: Part I
Hello,
First of all, this is the story that finally made me make an account to write a review.
It's a behemoth of a story with lots of content and themes that are all fairly explored. The characters have a lot of personality and are not just stand-ins for size stuff. Pete is a guy I love to hate and pity. Ashley is just so sweet and endearing. I love her so much.
And the scenes are so immersively written. One can feel the tremors, smell and humiliation, bro! Sometimes I would've liked if a 'that' was swapped with a 'her' or an 'a' but that's just minor stuff and a personal preference.
All in all what I like most about this story is that it is a story. An actually intriguing tale was told, and I was guessing what would happen next. All with just the right amount of humor. The end is perfectly in sync with what has happened before which makes it actually believable. Pete wants to be better! However, honestly, I don't think he can keep that resolve. He's a self-centered, arrogant douche that probably hates himself for throwing away his you-get-out-of-pet-jail-ticket after at most a week.
And that's what makes me so happy about your response to the previous review: I want to see more. I want to see Pete actually become Lil' Toe or die trying. I want to see more of Ashley being ditsy and lovable. I want more whiffs of her meaty sole or other parts of her body. Pete isn't the only one who wouldn't mind falling in her ass crack. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
So, masterful story you came up with, and great thanks to you! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to write such a long review!! I'm so happy you liked the story. I don't usually try to put that much character development in smut stories like this, but since the client asked for a long one, I wanted to try. I'm really glad it worked for you! There's of course some grammar and spelling stuff, English is not my first language after all, but I think I'm slowly getting better at it. I'm not sure if there's going to be a sequel per se, but the client was kind of into the idea, so we'll see what happens! I could perfectly leave it here, but who knows if somethint worth telling comes up (even if it's exploring other parts of her body or spending more time at her meaty soles, hehe). Again, thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2025 10:01 PM Title: Part I
Loved every bit of this story. Steamy and wholesome at the right size. Many thanks to who comissioned it and many thanks to you for writing and sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I think I've never written a story like this, and it certainly was very interesting to try a more wholesome tone, despite all the humiliation and the toxic stuff lurking underneath. And, who knows, maybe we'll see more of these two someday...