[Report This]Date: July 19 2025 9:51 AM Title: Lil' Toe
I find platonic relationships that later turn sexual somewhat really complex and interesting to write. Very interesting to note that he actually felt sorry for her at the end since she was shown to be desperate and lonely and accepted his fate of being a pet to his former friend with a sexual kink as well which is ironic given he didn't really find her attractive at normal size which really speaks of the situation and arousal can evolve over time in certain environments. I guess deep down he felt ashamed that he become somewhat conceited and too good for her. How the tables turn.
Mistaken identity where a tiny is mistaken as some random tiny human and not as themselves by a person they know is a really underused trope. Kudos for using it.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2025 11:25 AM Title: Lil' Toe
Hello,
First of all, this is the story that finally made me make an account to write a review.
It's a behemoth of a story with lots of content and themes that are all fairly explored. The characters have a lot of personality and are not just stand-ins for size stuff. Pete is a guy I love to hate and pity. Ashley is just so sweet and endearing. I love her so much.
And the scenes are so immersively written. One can feel the tremors, smell and humiliation, bro! Sometimes I would've liked if a 'that' was swapped with a 'her' or an 'a' but that's just minor stuff and a personal preference.
All in all what I like most about this story is that it is a story. An actually intriguing tale was told, and I was guessing what would happen next. All with just the right amount of humor. The end is perfectly in sync with what has happened before which makes it actually believable. Pete wants to be better! However, honestly, I don't think he can keep that resolve. He's a self-centered, arrogant douche that probably hates himself for throwing away his you-get-out-of-pet-jail-ticket after at most a week.
And that's what makes me so happy about your response to the previous review: I want to see more. I want to see Pete actually become Lil' Toe or die trying. I want to see more of Ashley being ditsy and lovable. I want more whiffs of her meaty sole or other parts of her body. Pete isn't the only one who wouldn't mind falling in her ass crack. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
So, masterful story you came up with, and great thanks to you! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to write such a long review!! I'm so happy you liked the story. I don't usually try to put that much character development in smut stories like this, but since the client asked for a long one, I wanted to try. I'm really glad it worked for you! There's of course some grammar and spelling stuff, English is not my first language after all, but I think I'm slowly getting better at it. I'm not sure if there's going to be a sequel per se, but the client was kind of into the idea, so we'll see what happens! I could perfectly leave it here, but who knows if somethint worth telling comes up (even if it's exploring other parts of her body or spending more time at her meaty soles, hehe). Again, thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2025 10:01 PM Title: Lil' Toe
Loved every bit of this story. Steamy and wholesome at the right size. Many thanks to who comissioned it and many thanks to you for writing and sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I think I've never written a story like this, and it certainly was very interesting to try a more wholesome tone, despite all the humiliation and the toxic stuff lurking underneath. And, who knows, maybe we'll see more of these two someday...