




Date: July 24 2025 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is an absolute MASTERPIECE! We've had a deficit in slow shrink format writing for a WHILE now and this piece, as well as the one from before with the mad scientist step sister, are FANTASTIC. Truly pieces that define a long lost art on this site. Most stories either go to fast on the way down so to speak or stop when they finally... get to the good parts... and yet your stories both encompass an amazing slow shrink pace, with all the teasing and build up but continue on and nail the finisher keeping going strong to the end! If I could rate this higher than 10 I would give it a rare 11, truly deserving of no less!
Author's Response:
Wow, that is high praise. Thank you very much.





Date: July 24 2025 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent writing and very good story telling 11/10
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.




Date: July 23 2025 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was super hot! I love your slow shrink to micro stories! You do a fantastic job at conveying scale and I absolutely adore they you don't spend every single story beat on feet, feet and more feet.
I'm actually more of a fan of SW content than SM or I'd give a whole 10 stars!
Author's Response:
Thank you.