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Reviewer: darkone Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2025 1:51 PM Title: Full Story

Looks like you fixed it. Have not had time to read it yet, so I'll do a real review later.

Reviewer: Bleez Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2025 11:40 AM Title: Full Story

I know it has a sad ending, but it only seems that way if you believe the characters were truly soulmates and loved each other - which was the goal overall. To express their love story and get others to feel a fraction of a percent of their connection.

Reviewer: darkone Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2025 3:59 AM Title: Full Story

The HTML is messed up. If you delete every instance of:

line-height: 1.15px; margin-bottom: 0.1in;

From the posting it will render properly.

If readers are in a hurry, copy the HTML source of the story, paste into a new local file on your computer, then delete the text I mentioned above (every instance, there are a lot of them) and then save the results as an HTML file and then open it with your browser.



Author's Response:

Is it fixed now?



Author's Response:

Is it fixed now?



Author's Response:

Is it fixed now?

Reviewer: chip Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2025 1:32 PM Title: Full Story

It's not just you, it's messed up for me too



Author's Response:

Is it fixed now? (Edit don’t mean to duplicate reply’s my pc as you can prob tell is buggy )

Reviewer: jake123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2025 7:36 AM Title: Full Story

Don't know if it's only on my end, but it's looks like there's a problem in the text



Author's Response:

Did my changes fix it?

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