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Reviewer: Moomoomilk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2025 6:29 PM Title: A dangerous new life

Fantastic start! Looking forward to see where the story goes, it has the potential to be one of my favorites! You mentioned gentle aware and violent unaware, my favorite dynamic.

Reviewer: Roxshrink18 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2025 3:56 AM Title: A dangerous new life

Wow! what a good start, very good work i would love to read the action in te gymnastics class, i love the unaware stuff, but I´m willing to read when he gets noticed and where, Im hoping for more action with lily and her mother, a bit more description of them would help with the perspective and the littleness that we are sseing it.

But very good work I cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2025 5:15 PM Title: A dangerous new life

Not a bad start.  I can't wait to see more.  I do hope that when you get to the parts of the story where they do forget him that they are remorseful and we get to see there thought process.  I do prefer the gentle giantess so I do hope it sticks to that for the most part but I understand if it veers away from it.  I don't get a sense of small he is or if he is even capable of being found at his size so I do hope you go into more detail.   Please keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, it's really nice to see someone is enjoying this. 

To be honest, I can not say much about how this will continue to go as I am making things up as I write them. I have a few background infos thought up but mostly it's just gonna be improvised. 


I can however say that I will try to keep the balance between gentle giants caring for him and unaware scenes.


As for how small he is, that will be explained in a later chapter, likely the next one if I don't get too detailed in my describtions. I originally had a completely different chapter written, describing the day before his shrinking but after it got randomly deleted I realized it was simply a lot of set up that could also be done parallel to the story happening. 

But don't worry, I do like things to be a accurate and detailed as possible in stories too and I have definitely put a bit of thought into how things work. 

Thanks and have a nice day. :)

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