Reviewer: NebulaDoodles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Beginning.

Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.

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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2025 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Heroine Training Part 2

For a first mission or a later one, how about a villain with the power to control cats and Mira is so used to using powers in games or so many cats that she uses her powers and ends up mouse sized before the battle is over for some cat and mouse fun with literal cats.

Author's Response:

Great plan, but that's not how I want her powers to progress, so this will be one of the last missions.

Or I just give this Villan some Pym Particles Gun. So this still will be one of the first missions. Probably second Villan.