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Date: September 02 2025 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4: Helen's Fantasy Fulfilled!!!

Still loving it! Good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you sundown. Responses are appreciated. 

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Date: August 31 2025 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Helen and Mackenzie Meet

This was a really great and snappy start to a story (mean that in a good way). I can't imagine, but can't wait to see where it goes. Great job on a first entry/chapter. Do you write anywhere else, or just starting out?



Author's Response:

Thank you. I used to write years ago. Starting up again.

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