Date: February 07 2026 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.
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Date: September 29 2025 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
A few words possibly got auto-corrected here and there.
Midway through the story, it changes to second person for no reason at all.
Other than that, quite nice.
Author's Response:
Cheers for the note.
I wrote this using dictate on word, which is less then reliable. I'm also didn't edit it as much as I should've before posting lol. I went through and fix the "second person" issue I think. I hadn't realised I switched, so thanks for pointing it out!