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Reviewer: NebulaDoodles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2026 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.


Discord: nebuladoodles

Email: luckiest297@gmail.com



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind comment — I really appreciate it! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story, and it means a lot that you could imagine it as a comic.

I love the idea, but I’m not in a position to afford a professional artist at the moment. That said, if you’d still like to adapt it into a comic on your own, I wouldn’t mind at all. 


Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2025 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was cute story. Short and sweet. I like that Lilly's playfulness was just simple fun and she was devastated when she thought she'd killed Liam.  Then switching back to playfulness when she noticed the effect of her kiss on him.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2025 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

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