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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2025 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow I’m really liking this story 

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2025 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter, I like the don't care attitude she has after finding out what happened. Please dont keep us waiting too long!



Author's Response:

She's had enough of his shenanigans!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2025 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nice. I kind of hope his wife doesn't see him and flushes...only for him to go through the sewer to the water treatment facility then co ti ue on his way to another girls cup of water and swallowed again.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying so far!

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2025 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice work so far! You open to story requests? If so, how do I contact you?



Author's Response:

Unfortunately I don't take story requests. Honestly surprised I was able to even write a whole one to begin with. Glad you've enjoyed the read so far, there's more to come!

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2025 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey! Just wanted to say I seriously hope you go through with this story and keep it unaware.  I could not say enough how much I appreciate the start and the approach for this story as I’ve been begging someone to do an unaware swallowed in a pill adventure.  I’m excited for what’s to come but please keep it going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review. I have this story written out, just going chapter by chapter to add detail and refine. Hopefully you'll be satisfied with the direction it takes.

I'm also planning a sequal and also a third story. Those are not written but the plot is there.

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2025 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start, love unaware scenarios as well, you described his wife perfectly and I cant wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest as much!

Reviewer: Moomoomilk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2025 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Can’t wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad to hear it! I should have the next chapter posted soon. Shooting for no later than end of day Friday.

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