The interactions sound quite interesting. I can see them as actual characters, instead of mere templates standing in for such.

Though, I really, really hope this story will have at least a degree of consent and gentleness. The MC is already screwed enough, so adding pure mindbreak to this would just be sad.

Not like in "Growing Closer", which has a similar premise, is quite well written, and makes me seriously sick whenever I skim through the chapter. 

The tormentor in this one is such a manipulative piece of filth that I can't even come up with a suitable punishment for how she's torturing the MC to make up for it. It's hard seeing evil getting rewarded, while the likeable MC in a bad place gets just worse and worse.

I see at least a degree of gentleness with the characters for now, and I hope they'll at least try to empathize with a being worse off than them.

(And hopefully not get into this weird "I'm a goddess, because I can bully someone weaker than me" mindset)

Very Strong beginning. Keep going. Looking forward for more. 

Wow this was good start I think you should have dialogue should be more spread out so it’s easier to read but overall great work