Reviews For Sarah, but Not
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Reviewer: Nesslilly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2025 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was such an adorable story!

I know you were probably aiming more for the horror vibes, but you can't just humanise Not-Sarah like that at the end and not expect people to empathise with her.

Either way, I hope you score highly in the contest! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Yes, I was definitely going for a spoopy horror vibe - although perhaps it's not such a good thing to empathise with Not-Sarah (she's got you tricked!)

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2025 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

There's no way for me to not read this as a story about mental health. I find this to be excellent writing. Thank you for this treat.



Author's Response:

Apologies for the late response, but I just wanted to say thanks for your review.

You are right, it is a story about mental health, stuffed through the sausage mixer of macrophilia. One day I will learn subtlety!

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