



[Report This]Date: November 04 2025 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a fun story so far; getting introduced with two shrinking scenes in one chapter is such a treat! Especially with such callous big people being around for both the luckily unfortunate Tinies. I do hope we'll eventually learn more on how Ben and Sara actually met. Or at least where/how Sara left Coco in the dust.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! And yes we'll be learning more on Ben and Sara's back story in due course!
Please feel free to check out my other story, Pearl!
Thanks!




[Report This]Date: November 01 2025 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very solid introduction, though it jumps around a lot. Still, great stuff and since all the exposition has been handled for the most part I can anticipate what comes next will be pretty straightforward.
Glad to see you writing again! I was a big fan of Marlee and Emma--I would love to see that story revived. If you are open to chatting with other writers I'm also open to that as well~
Author's Response:
Thank you - admittedly it's a little rough but I'll be editing it as I go along to flesh it out more.
I accidentally deleted Marlene & Emma, I'm sure I've still got a copy of it somewhere and I'll repost if there's interest in reviving the story.
Thabks for the feedback!