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Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 9:20 PM Title: None

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: miniscule Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2025 6:10 AM Title: None

“Please be kind???”  I don’t have to be kind. This is a great story. The writing is descriptive and clear. The characters are great. And for some reason, the name Donna is always great for an evil  and fun giantess. Looking forward to chapter 2. 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! As a first attempt I thought it turned out pretty good.

I hadn't thought about a second chapter as I am working on another story, but after that I'll rethink that if I get some feedback as great as yours.

Thanks again!

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