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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2026 12:10 AM Title: Supplemental 1

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2025 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks for re-posting this!  A most unexpected--though not unwelcome--Xmas present.  :-)

Love the corrupt governmental experiment angle.Suitably X-Files-ish!




Author's Response:

Thank you Carycomic.  You seem to be the only one whose noticed so far.

I figured that the hotel room visits could only go so far and theorize that's why the original author finally let the story die.   So, with some hope for the main protagonist, secret ultra rich psychopaths, and yes, government collusion, then perhaps this story has a road to new life. ;)

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