Date: May 06 2026 5:26 PM Title: Second Night at the Club
Hey man, when are you finally going to continue writing? Or maybe you’re running out of ideas for how the story should proceed? In that case, let me offer you a suggestion for your story. For instance, little Niel could accidentally get separated from Mei Lin and encounter a warm-hearted, loving, lonely, single Japanese SSBBW woman named Yui—who is around Niel's age, quite plump, and weighs in at about 150 kilograms. She could rescue little Niel from the streets and fall so deeply in love with him that she takes him home, never wanting to let him go again because she loves him, kisses him, and cuddles him. She could also allow sweet little Niel to explore her big, soft, voluptuous body—to climb on it, love it, kiss it, and cuddle up against it. For example, little Niel could absolutely adore her ample breasts, her big belly, and every other part of her body—especially the hairier areas—loving them and cuddling them close. And little Niel could be perfectly happy with the chubby Yui, never wanting to return to his old life or regain his normal size ever again. So, that would be my suggestion for how the story could continue. What do you think?
[Report This]Date: February 09 2026 5:23 PM Title: Micronization
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic.
Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level!
Feel free to reach out to me via Discord aeroo_draws Hope to hear from you soon
Date: February 08 2026 1:24 PM Title: Second Night at the Club
Nice chapter! I think my favorite part was the bit at the end where he had to drink her discharge. There’s just something so hot about it.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 11:20 PM Title: Micronization
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: January 12 2026 1:44 AM Title: Micronization
Love this chapter, the blowjob scene was well done. Hopefully the misunderstanding continues.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it :)
[Report This]Date: January 11 2026 6:46 PM Title: Micronization
I really like this whole story concept, your writing style, and how the story is progressing. Great work, can't wait for mire
Author's Response:
So encouraging, thank you!
Date: December 11 2025 6:00 AM Title: The Lounge Customers
I really liked chapter 3 too. And maybe little Niel will be crushed or assaulted by the swollen genitals.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2025 3:48 AM Title: Micronization
Fantastic, love the helplessness and humiliation. Too many of those types of stories go for crush so I’m glad to see this without. Also like the FM/m scenes, too few authors go for it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, happy to provide!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2025 1:35 AM Title: Micronization
Fantastic story so far! I look forward to seeing where this all goes
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2025 8:08 AM Title: Micronization
Great first two chapters. Hopefully, our protagonist will have an adventure in the clit ring in Subsequent chapters. Very original story and well written!
Date: November 27 2025 5:26 AM Title: Mei Lin's silver ring
Good start. But something would have to happen where the shrunken man stays that small forever, and he is trapped in this brothel forever, and all the women, including the madam, love him and want him in their bed, and he stays with them forever.