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Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Failed Tutorial

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

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Date: December 03 2025 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7: Loose Ends

In the next chapter, Mike's character will truly reveal itself, and I hope exactly what you teased happens :)

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