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Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Upgrade

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: UnawareLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2025 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Upgrade

Oh, I love everything about it!


Could you please make an alternate ending where Lauren thinks he's a bug and wants to feed him to some other insect because she's bored? :)


Reviewer: unawarefanboyXD Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2025 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Upgrade

I love your stories

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