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Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 9:25 PM Title: Laura Was Perfect

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Tripsy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2026 11:08 PM Title: Laura Was Perfect

Really expressive work belongs in comic format. Paid artist, connect with me! Discord: tripsydraws

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2026 4:34 AM Title: One take

I really hope there's more to this one.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2026 3:32 AM Title: Under Daisy

Daisy is truly wonderful.

Reviewer: LarryVonLars Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: January 17 2026 6:35 PM Title: Shrunken Exchange Students

ai slop

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2026 5:21 AM Title: Laura Was Perfect

Was kinda avoiding your stories, given how the other ones had awful formatting but this?

This is golden, the way the mother just grinds him down is amazing. Also liked the way their emotions changed, even if it didn't went anywhere (how the mother started to get off, how he did, etc).

A shame for the downer ending, and it would have been nice if the mother kept him forever at the end but it was awesome.

Reviewer: jake123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2026 8:15 PM Title: Laura Was Perfect

Those are great stories, would there be any other stories? 



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