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Reviewer: Gentleanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2026 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I read this a while ago, and just now bothered to log in to leave a review. I loved the characterisation of these two, and the story overall was both entertaining and incredibly sexy. Nice job!



Author's Response:

Thank you Gentleanon <3 I am glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: NebulaDoodles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.


Discord: nebuladoodles

Email: luckiest297@gmail.com

Reviewer: artisio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2026 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2026 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is so very good. Great characters, lovely descriptions, some really beautiful bits besides the smut - like when the AC cycled off leaving a deeper silence. I enjoyed every word, then subbed to your subscribestar, and enjoyed the rest. Love it! <3



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! Your support means the world to me :) I appreciate you so much!

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2026 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 1 is off to an incredibly compelling start, I love the subtle and playful dominance Raven is exuding before Trent even shrinks. I'm looking forward to see where things are heading. Hopefully those nylon clad legs and feet will cause some HR violations.

Fantastic appetizer, I'm already hooked. 10/10.



Author's Response:

Hahaha thank you! HR violations definitely inbound!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2026 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Suitably meticulous depiction of cause-and-effect.  Bravo!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! More coming soon!

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