[Report This]Date: March 26 2026 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hmmmm interesting very interesting and understandable that the mages left to protect their families very honorable choice
im already liking the new characters we meet
and the balon getting exhausted by sleeping with aurora is funny as hell as she makes sure he’s close no matter what lol
great job and I can’t wait to see the world building
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[Report This]Date: March 24 2026 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
God damn !!!!! Ruby is truly evil like holy shit Erika is definitely a close second the duo they are are like Darth Vader and lord sidus
the crushing methods used here where sexy as fuck absolutely fire dude
great job
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[Report This]Date: March 21 2026 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Once again balon being the absolute goat once again not only did he speak his shit he gave the two giantess here a reminder of what they stand for and why they are here
yuna I think now need some focus to futher development of her character and place in the story and the training arc with mages seems perfect
overall great stuff
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, I have big plans for the sacred valley.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2026 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
HOLY FUCK !!!!! That was epic dude Aurora was very brave this chapter and shows how she’ll become a great ruler one day
Ruby was perfect as always a true menace to out hero’s and the world
and Balon just got his goated status today like bro came in clutch like no other
fantastic work
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[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy shit that was intense !!!! Great opening and fight in this chapter!
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[Report This]Date: March 13 2026 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Holy shit back to back horror stories here lol nice job I already love Erica and how she operates haha can’t wait to see what else she does in the story
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[Report This]Date: March 11 2026 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit this chapter was crazy !! Bro Ruby is on demon time lol just overall great work with showing how evil and unredeemable she is
the smut action was unbelievable so good! And Ruby so far has had the best dialogue honestly.
overall great job
ps - now question…. Would it be too much to ask for maybe …some odor stuff like … smelly feet, or burp/farts, armpit and bad breath smut ? Again if that too much to ask that cool just figured id ask
amazing work!
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[Report This]Date: March 08 2026 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Amazing chapter and the emotional beats were well done ! A good light chapter
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[Report This]Date: March 04 2026 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit three giantess now ! That’s actually shocking?!!!
nice work here once again Ruby showing why she’s the main villain
yuna still has magic and pretty good magic that will help in the upcoming fights
aurua did pretty well but will probably need to train more lol
overall great job
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[Report This]Date: March 02 2026 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hmmm interesting lore reveal about aurora and her powers and curse.
Yuna was great as always I’m sure we’ll get a deep dive into her character and lore before she arrived here
the king was very good as well and honestly had valid points and reasoning behind his actions. Loved the embrace with him and his daughter.
Oh Ruby ….. what is there to say besides she’s pure evil and sexy while doing it! I know she’ll probably do even more crazy and cruel things later on.
i also loved the tease for the next chapter especially when it’s done right! Nice work there without spoiling anything.
further more - loved the vore, feet, and cruelty smut here. Can’t wait to see what else you do in this story.
overall great work
ps - I suggest the fight with the three should be similar to invincible vs Omni man or conquest fights in my opinion it would be so dope and show the stakes are high
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Perhaps we'll see more fights like this soon.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2026 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
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[Report This]Date: February 26 2026 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
MVP Ruby really showing why she here !!!
Fantastic work on showing her evil side in this chapter evil to the core she is for sure
also fantastic job with description of her cruel acts very clean and easy to visualize
once again no issues I can think of besides me wishing it was long lol
great work.
ps - great job with the butt action here speaking from a butt crush fan so thanks for that
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[Report This]Date: February 24 2026 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow nice work really enjoyed this chapter it was both funny and entertaining nice balance
looks like aurora is very good at being a giant and causing less damage and harm to a degree.
yuna is …. Very clumsy it seems love her lol
overall good job
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. It inspires me.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2026 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Holy shit this was fantastic!!!!! From beginning to end Ruby has skyrocketed to my favorite character!
the smut action here was perfect! And sexy to read well done with the details and description!
I kinda want to see the count live to serve Ruby but I’m sure she’ll fine someone better lol
a d the dialogue and flow of the story was absolutely perfect!! Great work and a vast improvement!
I can’t wait to see where we go and what else happens
PS - love the butt crush scene as a huge butt/ass fan absolutely loved this and hope to see more
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. I will take your suggestions into account.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2026 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow another great chapter
I really like the confined height of the two giantess here really helps.
Aurora really feels like a wild character lol I like her and feel like she might have a crush on Balon it seems
the introduction of Ruby was shocking and interesting to see the reveal there.
the mystery of Ruby and this curse really brought the plot to whole new level and I love it.
Now I will say the plot did feel a little rushed at the beginning, the dialogue is getting better but can still feels idk out of place sometimes but again it’s vastly improved overall, and feel like the characters could be more fleshed out like they got meat but no bones if you know what I’m saying.
overall great chapter once again.
ps - now I’m curious what kind of smut action we can expect later on?
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[Report This]Date: February 18 2026 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow okay I like were this is going so far this princess definitely reminds me of a character from an anime but I can’t remember who exactly
yune is a fun character definitely plays into the innocent, but very powerful archetype of a MC
the side characters are very interesting and The plot is getting better and better every chapter
Things that can improve I’ll say the dialogue could be a little bit more tighter but has improved and Yune could maybe not mention she’s an ordinary girl multiple times it can get a little repetitive.
but overall pretty good stuff here and very interested to see where everything goes next
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[Report This]Date: February 17 2026 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm very interesting concept the dialogue could be a little bit better and a little bit more sharper, but overall pretty consistent storytelling and I’ll also say the size description can be inconsistent at few times but still pretty good
overall nice work
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Thank you for your feedback. I will take your suggestions into account.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2026 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello did you make your mind?
Author's Response:
I don't need it now.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2026 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. I'll think about your suggestion.