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Reviewer: CameronArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2026 12:14 AM Title: CH2: The Consequence

Absolutely can't wait for more once again. Was fun getting the glimpse of the feet that I imagine he'll be getting a lot more familiar with at some point 

I can't wait to see her get her brother. Especially after her kinda nice remark when they were talking about their Dad, and he had the chance to take it at face value and actually have a nice moment with her for once, but he decided that would be weakness and threw it in her face. He kinda deserves to be knocked down a peg by her after that

Incredible stuff 

Reviewer: Tiny Drake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2026 1:28 PM Title: CH2: The Consequence

This story also sounds really interesting, and I can't wait to see how it continues.

Their sibling dynamic is very charming, and I have no doubt that Cat will use the invention to her advantage (and to her little brother's disadvantage).

Despite this, however, my softer side can't help but hope that they'll find a way to create a true bond, insults and perversions aside.

Reviewer: jake123 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2026 12:31 PM Title: CH1: The Buckle

Feels like it was made by ai



Author's Response:

Your Mom was made by AI

Reviewer: KingNeo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2026 6:15 AM Title: CH1: The Buckle

This story so far has been all that I’ve been looking for, honestly love reading these chapters. The cast and the writing have especially been amazing so far so I’m glad you’re planning on continuing this story. I’ll be patiently/excitedly waiting for the next chapter (and Cat appearance) to drop!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Appreciate it. 

Reviewer: CameronArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2026 8:31 PM Title: CH1: The Buckle

Really loved this, the detail and flow were excellent. Really looking forward to her getting her hands on him after seeing their dynamic, and was sad when the chapter ended. Extremely anxiously awaiting the next installment 



Author's Response:

Thank-you! I know I want to skip right ahead and get to their dynamic but I have some really good stuff to set up before that pivotal moment. It'll be a slow burn, but trust: It's gonna be good. Hope you like the second chapter and thanks again!

Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2026 3:59 PM Title: CH1: The Buckle

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws



Author's Response:

OK.

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