[Report This]Date: May 18 2026 12:26 PM Title: CH1: The Delgados
Wow, great story so far! Can't wait to see more
I noticed on Chapter 1 there's a comment about your old short stories - as someone who never got chance to read these, and who likes your writing style/content, do you happen to still have them saved? Even if you're not happy enough about them for public viewing, I'd love to read them
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm getting the fifth chapter out there soon. Glad you like my style.
I don't have those stories saved, but the concepts I still remember. There was only two short stories, and one pretty big one. The big one was like 'Big Little Sister' and I think I wrote it and deleted it like three times, so I practically know the beats by heart. The one short story is about some wish, and the other one I'm kinda trashing. Not a fan of it. It was some teacher one and I just didn't like how I wrote it every time. But I do have a brand new short story I just recently finished up. I'm in the process of formatting the chapters (adjusting the line spacing and text, annoying crap that happens from copying-and-pasting from Google Docs), so I'll probably have the rest of the chapters published by sometime this week.
Date: May 17 2026 5:34 PM Title: CH4: The Consequence
Well the rewrite is good and I'm very much looking forward to the fully new chapter soon
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: May 04 2026 4:59 AM Title: CH1: The Delgados
Just curious why the choice to rewrite and split up the chapters? Looking forward to new stuff when it comes!
Author's Response:
I didn't like how chunky the chapters were, how much of a slow burn it was and that it's a smut taboo story without any real smut yet. I mean, this story is still a slow burn after the rewrite, but I think the flow is a lot better and leans harder into the smut. Finally finished the original four chapters, sorry for the wait. Working on finalizing the fifth one, aka the new one. Thanks :)
Date: April 24 2026 10:15 PM Title: CH1: The Delgados
Thanks for the update on the story progress, looking forward to what's next!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2026 12:14 AM Title: CH2: The Belt
Absolutely can't wait for more once again. Was fun getting the glimpse of the feet that I imagine he'll be getting a lot more familiar with at some point
I can't wait to see her get her brother. Especially after her kinda nice remark when they were talking about their Dad, and he had the chance to take it at face value and actually have a nice moment with her for once, but he decided that would be weakness and threw it in her face. He kinda deserves to be knocked down a peg by her after that
Incredible stuff
[Report This]Date: March 07 2026 1:28 PM Title: CH2: The Belt
This story also sounds really interesting, and I can't wait to see how it continues.
Their sibling dynamic is very charming, and I have no doubt that Cat will use the invention to her advantage (and to her little brother's disadvantage).
Despite this, however, my softer side can't help but hope that they'll find a way to create a true bond, insults and perversions aside.
Date: March 05 2026 12:31 PM Title: CH1: The Delgados
Feels like it was made by ai
Author's Response:
Your Mom was made by AI
Date: March 05 2026 6:15 AM Title: CH1: The Delgados
This story so far has been all that I’ve been looking for, honestly love reading these chapters. The cast and the writing have especially been amazing so far so I’m glad you’re planning on continuing this story. I’ll be patiently/excitedly waiting for the next chapter (and Cat appearance) to drop!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2026 8:31 PM Title: CH1: The Delgados
Really loved this, the detail and flow were excellent. Really looking forward to her getting her hands on him after seeing their dynamic, and was sad when the chapter ended. Extremely anxiously awaiting the next installment
Author's Response:
Thank-you! I know I want to skip right ahead and get to their dynamic but I have some really good stuff to set up before that pivotal moment. It'll be a slow burn, but trust: It's gonna be good. Hope you like the second chapter and thanks again!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2026 3:59 PM Title: CH1: The Delgados
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
Author's Response:
OK.