[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 5:46 PM Title: Arrival
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions.feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 12:02 PM Title: Arrival
This story really caught my eye because it reminds me of my past a little too much. I’m not even a twitter person and just lurk there.
I know of a time like 7 years ago where I was exhibiting eerily similar behavior to Melanie. And I got the same treatment, minus my arm getting crushed and all my limbs breaking. That voice call scene in the last chapter was pretty much just like my worst memories from that time.
People like Melanie definitely exist and I was a prime example when I was much younger. As I’ve gotten older and grown past being a child I really value communication and confrontation before conflict.
Sadly it looks that Melanie doesn’t have a chance and I guess it really saddens me because after a friend group kicks a member out and blocks them, they rarely get a second chance, only this seems like her hell will last forever.
idk I might just be overanalyzing it. Yet, I’m very moved by this story and my head cannon wants to believe there’s a redemption arc for Melanie. Sorry for my rambling but it’s a good read.
Author's Response:
Hi there, thank you so much for taking the time to read, reflect and write about your thoughts. I 100% understand that people like Melanie exist because unfortunately most of the unnamed pet's behavior is semi-autobiographical, sans lack of empathy and torture... I hope. It sucks being kind and considerate, going into a dynamic with certain expectations (they domme, you sub) and you want to make the other side happy, so you don't mind topping them on occasion... but it turns out that their big, blustering persona is actually just a front for a deeply insecure, needy and selfish person that just wants to bask in their own pleasure and selfishly don't particularly care about (you) or your interests.
Melanie is obviously a bad person, but the unnamed pet is also my own self-reflection and indictment. Like you said, sometimes I'll kick out / ignore someone that maybe could've changed. Maybe my relationship with people is transactional; because they are of no longer use to me I metaphorically break their limbs and keep them in a cup to talk with on occasion but no longer feel any real emotional stakes towards. What's my role in the bad behavior, and how am I fundamentally being a bad person?
I really appreciate you analyzing it and wanting to believe in more or better for both of them. I love happy endings, and desire the happiness for those around me and even the fictional characters I give life to. Unfortunately the pair are the yin and yang of an Ahriman that embody a toxic, insincere, selfish, self-serving relationship where neither truly understands, respects or cares for the other but just because that was what I had envisioned doesn't mean that that is where their fate lies.
Your earnest desire for some type of redemption has given me serious pause and I'm going to ponder on what might become of these two; if they have a fate beyond just that of nested destruction.
Thanks again for reading and responding, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2026 8:58 PM Title: Hell
Seeing as this will is the final chapter, I'll just say, this was hot.
I love the way you describe the dirt, grime and horror in this story, the sheer dehumanization and cold disappearance of the care this god once had for her, which has not turned into sadistic hatred, but unfeeling disregard. It is also delicious to end it on hopelessness instead of death.
I wish I had someone dumb enough to send themselves over like that. Nah, I probably do, just need the tech.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear you enjoy it! It looks like it really didn't resonate with too many others, but that's okay - it was a fun exploration of a few ideas and I'm happy with the result.
One thing I'll note - is it clear that the pet actually ever cared for Melanie? The hope was to make it abundantly clear that Melanie never really viewed her pet as a person, in so far as she never actually calls her her real name, and it's not clear that Melanie even knows it... but that the pet, at least now, objectifies her as well. She clearly has no issues exploiting, ruining and torturing a bitch's life even as she performatively acts as the uwu cute girl she usually pretends to be, so did she ever actually care for Melanie too and her feelings were left to rot, or was this always the true her?
Either way, I'm still happy to hear it hit the mark. The despair and hopelessness were definitely the centerpiece of what I was shooting for and glad it hit the mark.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2026 7:16 AM Title: Purgatory
This got dark quickly. Could the pet, nay God, be lying about her parents just to make her feel extra hopeless? Or do you have a like for these surreal cruel worlds where every other human's turned heads creates a playground for devils? Really reads like one of those cruel comics a lot of Daz3D users make.
Author's Response:
An excellent question, it is an exercise left to the reader! I don't really have a particular like for situations like this usually; honestly usually I prefer happiness and fluff and all that jazz, but just sometimes there's just a itch for cruelty that's nice to scratch and expunge the darkness so to speak. Still thank you so much for reading, I imagine I'll probably mark it completed after the next chapter. I hope you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: March 13 2026 4:12 PM Title: Arrival
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: March 11 2026 4:51 PM Title: Arrival
Ah yes, remember bugs; never fidget with the parameters of dangerous technology while you’re submissively horny.
It was nice hearing I inspired someone so I came to check it out. It’s a really cute intro and premise, I always love stories with role reversal, and as someone with a 1k+ following on Twitter for IRL fetish pics, I can relate to wanting a break from being the dominant one.
You’re good at spicy and horny wording, the entire chapter feels sticky and wet. I wish I could pull that off. Excited to see those chapters you already got cooked up.
Author's Response:
Very much so, thank you for coming to take a look and I'm super glad you enjoyed it! Me too, role reversal is always nice, especially when they so obviously ignore all of the danger and warning signs.
For sure, and I imagine some folks I know would probably feel... attacked if I sent to this to them directly lol; totally get where even mostly dommes need a break but this is (obviously) drawing inspiration from paper tigers that tend to be a bit more selfish and take more than they give. Well, in this fictional example they're certainly going to get what they deserve!
I really appreciate it, and that was definitely the vibe I was hoping for, something nice and pulpy from the jump. Not sure how many more chapters it'll go but I hope you like the rest of what's there! Thanks again for reading and reviewing.