[Report This]Date: July 03 2026 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your story.
It's rare to come across a story that feels so vivid and immersive. Your writing made every scene easy to visualize, and the characters felt genuine and memorable. The world you've built has a level of depth that kept me invested from beginning to end, and while reading, I could clearly imagine it unfolding like a cinematic comic series.
I'm a professional digital artist who specializes in comic adaptations and commissioned artwork. One of my favorite things is helping authors bring their stories to life visually while staying faithful to the emotions, characters, and atmosphere that made the original work special.
As I was reading your story, I couldn't help imagining how incredible certain scenes would look in comic form. I genuinely believe your story has strong visual storytelling potential, and I would love the opportunity to work with you if that's something you'd ever be interested in exploring.
If you'd like, we can talk more on Discord: dizzysketchie. I'd be happy to answer any questions, discuss ideas, and show examples of my work. No pressure at all I simply loved your story and wanted to reach out because I think it could make an amazing comic.
Thank you for sharing your work, and I look forward to hearing from you.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2026 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oof, Ru'a is cheering on an execution? She's kinda already brainwashed into Dark Elf servitude.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2026 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ah, Love-bombing. Classic manipulation.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2026 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oooh, that last line is ominous.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2026 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the casual, nostalgic talk of brutal pirate raids.
[Report This]Date: April 05 2026 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Plot twist!
And now we get some intrigue, and it turns out our little human may not be so helpless after all.
Always love the "butler/sidekick is way smarter than they let on" trope.
[Report This]Date: April 05 2026 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Reposting since I can't edit these.)
Always up for some "humans conquered by giant races" action. Will check this out.
Addendum: Love, LOVE the bait and switch here. It seems like the dark elves will turn out to be decent folk after all, from their friendly behavior...and then Lucy gets her name casually taken from her, and the elves start gleefully talking about brutal executions. Turns out their reputation is well-deserved.
I'm interested in Lucy/R'ua's curse, the potential for her to return to her normal size is a great plot thread.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2026 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Went to register here as a long time lurker just to make this review. I like the setting. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Is Bloody Ann even going to continue? It was one of the few crueler stories I enjoyed. Also are you going to upload those stories on size fiction? I came across stepped sister there and mainly use that site now.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you're liking this! And to answer your questions: Ann might (and this is a big might) be re-written in its entirety, I like the setting and the characters but since I dropped it so many years ago I feel like I don't even write like how I used to anymore, not that I think that I'm any better, but continuing straight up where I left it would be kinda jarring. As for SF, I'm probably going to publish this there too, I haven't used the site in a while but I have my stories dispersed all around and it'll be nice if I had everything up on every site, although juggling between accounts can be a little exhausting.