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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2026 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Reunion

Hmmmmm very interesting start to the story overall good job for the first start it did get a little confusing about the setting in the middle bit and I kinda got a little lost in some parts but it was still good regardless 

I can’t wait to see what else you got in store and hope kickyou see this soon 

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