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Reviewer: Giantess_TG Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2026 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Reunion

Great your story completely pulled me in. I could vividly picture every scene, feel the emotions, and watch it all unfold like a cinematic experience in my mind. The depth of your characters and the richness of your world genuinely inspired me. I’d love to talk more about your story, and I also have a few questions I’d really like to ask you. If you’re open to it, could you come to Discord? It’s a bit easier to communicate there. My Discord is: dizzysketchie 

Reviewer: blackflashed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2026 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Reunion

  • Your story is written really well, but a couple things kinda threw me off. I’d love to talk it over with you. I’ve got some questions and ideas too. Can we chat on Discord? This is my Discord: artisioa



  • Author's Response:

    Hi there, of course, I’ve sent you an invite

    Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: April 22 2026 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Reunion

    Hmmmmm very interesting start to the story overall good job for the first start it did get a little confusing about the setting in the middle bit and I kinda got a little lost in some parts but it was still good regardless 

    I can’t wait to see what else you got in store and hope kickyou see this soon 

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