[Report This]Date: June 03 2026 8:53 PM Title: Epilogue
This was a nice ending to a nice story. Overall it had both things that appeal to me: destruction and kindness. The first few chapters had the former and the rest of the story had the latter. As another reviewer mentioned, it was nice to see a giantess who has a heart and protected the tiny people. The ending was a happy one too, and realistic in that many tiny people came around to liking her, some forgave her, but others were still angry/upset, plus Giovanna being very patient but not a pushover either. There were some unsolved mysteries, like that bit with Marissa King and the "good samaritan" who helped Giovanna deal with the aftermath of getting rid of Wright.
I chuckled when Skye and Katja were mentioned, nice little call backs to old clients, each for their own reasons.
Story ended nicely and definitively but part of me hopes for, not a sequel but a future story that calls back to this in some way. We still have the mysterious stone that can teleport things between universes at different sizes. Maybe this comes up in a future story? A little cross universe exploration or giant heroines popping up in other worlds? Just saying, there is potential there but if you want to end it here that's fine too.
Anyway, great work, charming story.
Author's Response:
I wanted it to feel somewhat realistic, I knew that people would always hate her no matter what and Giovanna knew that and would never push people to forgive her. I'd like to imagine Giovanna was a good caretaker regardless, basically dedicating two years of her life to the tiny people without ever leaving the mansion.
Marissa King is the good samaritan who helped Giovanna cover up Wright's disappearance. Marissa had a video in Wright's computer, so we can assume that Marissa had completed her task inside Wright's chamber and perhaps Marissa felt guilty for it afterward and helped Giovanna bury it all so nobody else would come asking questions.
Thank you so much for the kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2026 10:30 PM Title: Epilogue
I have to say the story developed and ended massively different than anything I could have imagined back when it started with Skye. I also think for that same reason a lot of readers who would appreciate the Giovanna arc may miss out on it because they may not read the story in its entirety if they Skye part doesn't appeal to them and so they never go beyond that. On the other hand, those who do enjoy that Skye part may not enjoy the radically different gentle approach of Giovanna. I think most readers will fall into either or the other of the two camps.
Unlike some of the "villains" in your other stories (Anton, Nyla, etc.) where their demise seemed too quick and easy compared to their crimes and what they deserve, Wright's punishment seems very fitting and cathartic. It definitely wasn't quick or easy for him. Still doesn't make up for what he did, but he definitely was punished.
I thought the part where Giovanna put him in her mouth was gross though. Not only is he such a repulsive character even under best circumstances, but the fact he hadn't bathed in 3 years up to that point...YUCK! Even the Venus Fly-Trap probably deserved better than that. Giovanna should have maybe made him bathe first.
Anyway, I do appreciate Giovanna being a good and moral character. Not every giantess needs to be, but when literally every one falls into the same violent tropes things become very stale and repetitive. The good guys do need to win at least sometimes, you know?
Part of me kinda hopes Kristen from your other story will get a Wright level comeuppance at some point. Like him she would definitely deserve it.
One thing I was wondering about that never got addressed was what Marissa King did in the video that Giovanna refused to watch. She clearly knew what was up with the whole tiny city thing because she had been in on it herself, but the fact she let Wright's disappearance slide and helped Giovanna get away with it suggests she is somewhat moral. I don't think she's as stupid as Skye so she probably knew the tinies were real people, but then again Wright let her go so she must have killed them. So I dunno. I was kinda thinking Giovanna would eventually watch it and there would be some sort of surprise twist or something, but if that were to be the case we'll never know now because she deleted that and all the other videos.
Author's Response:
I knew people were either going to love it or hate it because the entire premise of the story switches halfway through. Originally Giovanna was going to eat him, but I had the plant death added because I thought it was more fitting. I don't want to be only known for writing evil people so Giovanna is up there on a mount rushmore of the rare moral characters I write.
Marissa King was a federal agent who participated in Wright's chamber in some capacity, I left it open ended because I don't think Giovanna wanted to know on purpose. Perhaps Marissa felt guilty for what she did and helped Giovanna cover it up and Marissa did not at all seem sad for Wright's disappearance.
Date: May 26 2026 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Tiny Keys
Sorta reminded me of the classic throne room light saber duel between Luke Skywalker and Darth Vader in Star Wars, with Wright being like the Emperor watching and taunting and trying to get Luke to turn to the dark side. But like Luke, Giovanna refused to do that and instead collaborated with her opponent (in this case the tinies) to defeat the Emperor/Wright. Good on her.
I have to say her ability to tie Wright up seems a bit contrived though. Being peppersprayed in the face is incapacitating, but not in such a way that makes it easy to tie someone up. They can still flail their arms around and stuff so I dunno. But anyway, with that being done I wonder what her next move will be.
Frankly, I think it would be morally alright for her to have just bludgeoned or stabbed him to death. He kidnapped her and was willing to starve her to death inside that cell, so why would it be wrong to kill him? Self defense, you know. Plus he is responsible for the deaths of thousands (at least), and who knows how many more might die if he's allowed to continue. Logically speaking the best moral choice is to simply kill him and be done.
Calling the police is another option. If these tiny people were abducted from some alternate dimension as I suspect then it might be unclear how Earth's laws would be applicable to Wright's crimes. However, in addition to that, false imprisonment/kidnapping of Giovanna is definitely a crime. He also records everything so he has incriminated himself by refusing to allow her to leave and his willingness to starve her death. Its criminal even if the law doesn't apply to the abducted tinies (which is hard to say).
The fact he has no way of reversing the shrinking isn't surprising since he had no intention of doing it so why would he bother figuring that part out? But maybe those same tiny engineers who worked out how to open that keypad can look at all the available data and figure that out. Otherwise they're doomed to remain in this world and small I guess, but I don't think Giovanna will let them be killed in any case.
Date: May 26 2026 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Tiny Keys
Go Giovanna go! The first half of this chapter was intense! Giovanna's thoughts as she tried to make it out of the city without hurting anyone, being reminded of the things she'd done along the way. I liked her kindness mixed with worry as she helped those people as best she could. The tiny people's reactions were all understandable as well, from hate to fear, to confusion to tentative hope. Also, tiny people teaming up with her to help open the door was sweet. They are all in the mess together and she's their best best of getting out of it.
When she got out of the chamber and went after Wright, that was awesome! And the part of her channeling the anger of all Italian women before her was funny. I noticed that we got a hint of the secret behind the chamber too. Some kind of mysterious power source. I wonder what Giovanna will do next? She is essentially in charge of everything right now and she has her tiny companions who can help her figure out how the machine works. All she needs at this point is access to Wright's bank accounts and businesses and she can retire, maybe not quite the way she expected. This story is great! I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I really wanted to make her feel the guilt and shame, and we she accidentally kills more people it's very frustrating for her. I hope the story ended up being a good ending, gentle and good outcomes aren't necessarily my specialty lol
Date: May 26 2026 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Buying Happiness
Like this story although I'd like to see them way smaller like in the original story
Author's Response:
Yeah, I get it, but I just don't want to write the same micro city story over and over again
[Report This]Date: May 22 2026 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Giovanna
Now that was a heck of a chapter! As always, your descriptiveness is top notch, the creativity and cruelty of the giant woman, the panic and reactions of the tiny people. But this time there's a twist! Giovanna going from absolutely enjoying herself to pure horror was amazing. From sadistic and playful destroyer to guilt after she realized what she'd done. Part of me wants to say "take that" to her but I actually don't feel that way. Instead I feel hope that she'll find a way to rescue what's left of the city and its people. Giovanna is a smart woman, I'm sure she'll figure something out. Maybe we will get to see just how Wright acquires those shrunken cities too.
The reactions of the people were great too, multiple times they tried to get her attention and eventually succeeded. Plenty still fear her, some hate her, no apology will fix that. Your stories are more than just smut, there's a actual plot going on here and it makes me just as excited as the fan service. What Giovanna will do next. How will she get out of this? Can she defeat Wright and save the survivors? I eagerly await the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank goodness people are liking it, I didn't release this story for a long time because I thought people would hate the switch Giovanna makes. I don't want people to say "take that" to Giovanna, she was genuinely betrayed and I honestly feel bad for her and the people, but at least she figured it out when she did. Thank you for calling m stories more than smut, that's my goal as I've evolved as a writer.
Date: May 19 2026 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Giovanna
That took an unexpected turn! Got me wondering where will it go from here...
Author's Response:
Hopefully somewhere good!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2026 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Buying Happiness
I'm gonna be honest, I am MUCH more interested in this story with the introduction of Giovanna. This type of Giantess archetype is very unique, a woman who both revels in the power she holds and yet her morals hold more weight than any power fantasy she has, because at the end of the day, this is just a fantasy to her.
For Wright, cruelty and destruction is only valuable because it's real. I doubt that even if he had the ability to create the AI powered robots that he lied to Giovanna about, that he would even bother. He would probably find it distasteful or fake. Because despite being such a vapid and narcissistic man. he seems to value authenticity a lot.
Anyway time to gush about the chapter, LOVED the destruction, as always the way you write destruction scenes are just incredible. I weirdly found the destruction even hotter when Giovanna found out she was killing real people. The disconnect between what her body feels, and what her mind is telling her what is right is just amazing.
Loved the chapter, I'm really excited for how she'll handle this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes exactly, I was hoping people would take interest in the twist. It was also the reason I didn't release the story for like a year because I thought people would hate the fact that it was the typical crushing finale they would be used to seeing in a giantess story. I think you're spot on with Giovanna, it's just a fantasy for her, and her morality means more to her which I would hope the general population would agree with.
Date: May 13 2026 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Cravings
Okay, I got around to reading the story. I agree with the other reviewer that said the city was "too large". Well, obviously not for the people in the city. lol But at the size the people were in comparison to Skye it makes it hard to believe she wouldn't recognize them as actual shrunken people, or you'd think she ought to have some serious questions in regards to how such realistic "special effects" would even be possible. But I get it that she is meant to be a ditzy airhead. She seems to be less intelligent than many of the previous "actresses" Wright has hired. Anyway, the city being a smaller scale in addition to what would appeal to me more personally, would also make it more plausible for her to not realize or question the reality of it, because its harder to make out the detail and like-likeness of the victims when they're of a smaller scale. I also think that for a city of such a large scale where one of the skyscrapers is described as being of the same size as Skye, its not going to be something the maids could so trivially just sweep up with a broom afterwards. It would take much more doing to clean up twisted metal and debris of buildings that are on the scale of a human. Now, a much smaller scale like Ostrov which you had Kristen sweep half of it up a few chapters back in your other story, that would definitely be an easy clean up, AND it would be very plausible to confuse it with some model, which is exactly the case when Rasha discovered it. But that sort of scale has its own different sort of issues. It limits the level of interactions that are possible. And I get it that this sort of scale is probably ideal for what Wright is after. I'm not sure what the ideal "sweet spot" for scale is, or if there even is one, because like the name of this story it is completely "Subjective" lol.
As for Skye, I just want to say that based on your description of her as well as from the image Gravel made of her, I was reminded of "Timeless Toni Storm" from AEW. At least appearance wise, because her personality is substantially different.
As for Wright, sorta reminds me very much of Anton in a way from your other story. I had suspected that Anton somehow was behind what happened, and in this story Wright is without a doubt absolutely behind it. A depraved woman with some sort of shrinking/teleportation technology like Katherine in The Honored Guest is definitely a force to reckon with, but the same also goes for a man with that sort of capability with a giantess fetish who would put otherwise benign women in that sort of position in order to satisfy his own kinks. For something like this story I think a man makes more sense in that sort of role. Women might lust for power in their own right, but it just seems a bit less likely to me that a woman have the interest in putting some other woman into that position for their own entertainment, though I could be wrong. It does seem like something more likely a man would do. I mean you could have had this general story be within that same world as The Honored Guest and had Katherine hire some other women destroy (unwittingly or not) some captured city and film it for her entertainment. It would work, but it seems more plausible that it would be a man like Wright who would do something like that, so that definitely makes more sense to me.
Author's Response:
I think Wright is way more sure of himself than Anton, Wright way more mentally stable and calculating. He is an artist in his own head while Anton was more obsessed.
Wright also represents the symbolism of the audience in a way because people just want the smut if that makes sense.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2026 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Buying Happiness
I like the premise, exploring how different women react to wielding absolute power over a tiny city, and the morality behind choosing to destroy it, whether they justify it for a quick payday, act out of genuine cruelty, or are simply too dumb and careless to think twice about it.
That said, I disagree with Wright's belief that it's simply human nature to subjugate those who are less powerful, especially given the obvious selection bias in the kinds of women he chooses as subjects. Then again, maybe absolute power really does corrupt absolutely.
The homage to Attack of the 50 Foot Woman during Skye's rampage was a fun reference (really hoping the Margot Robbie remake gets released someday), while the intentionally bad acting and cringy dialogue from some of the girls were a nice touch, especially given the context here.
As other reviewers have mentioned, it would be cool to see even greater size differences introduced into the story, but it's still peak either way!
Author's Response:
I think you're going to like what the story turns into in chapter 5 and 6 then because I agree with you.
Date: May 06 2026 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Enter Skye
Nice!
The city was too big for my taste lol, but I know that this is on the larger end of scale compared to your usual settings so I appreciate you exploring different things. Due to the larger scale, along with the unaware aspect of it, I would rank it beneath "The Honoured Guest", but that's just me.
I for one wouldn't mind seeing you come back to this one, perhaps with different models, actresses, and different scales to explore. I'm curious to see what other personalities and types of ladies he has brought to the play room. New models, past models, maybe some who are smart enough to put together that these are more than just advanced movie sets, or some that really want to be called back not just for the paycheck. Lots of potential there!
Thanks for sharing it!Author's Response:
Haha, yeah I know that I usually write smaller cities, but I like to mix it up!
[Report This]Date: May 04 2026 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Enter Skye
Holy moly! Another great story from you! Once again I love the level of detail and descriptiveness in your writing. The destruction, the casual cruelty and brutality not necessarily out of malice but because the giant woman is just having fun. Sure she does get more sadistic as time goes on but that's because she's really getting into it and enjoying herself!.
The plot seems interesting. A chamber that teleports cities at a tiny size so beautiful women can rampage and destroy it for fun, while their patron watches, has a lot of potential. Skye is a fun character, ditzy and air-headed, not the sort of person who would really stop to think about things unless it benefits her. Her profession and her air-headed mindset means she'll do her job, do it well, and enjoy it and she's doing great so far.
I hope you continue this story. I'm curious to see what more Skye does, what happens to the tiny city after everything is done, and how many times the man (I forget his name) has done this sort of thing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, it's only brutality from Skye because she was gullible enough to realize that these aren't real people. You nailed Skye, ditzy, only thinks about herself really and her image.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2026 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Buying Happiness
I love this concept!! Would love to see an extended montage of this guy using all sorts of different models to fulfil his twisted desires without them ever fully realising what they are doing
Author's Response:
Thank you! That actually was an idea I had and kinda fits chapter 4.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2026 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Buying Happiness
Your writing is great
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2026 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Enter Skye
Incredible work. The pandemonium and chaos are so well described. You also nailed it with Skye's attitude - her transition from curious to sadistic was perfect. Thanks for releasing the story and always looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Skye thinks it's all fake so she's being to careless about it, loved writing her and her lame quips.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2026 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Buying Happiness
Wow! I love the premise as well as your writing style. This is a great read and I look forward to seeing where you take it! Her breasts sound godly- love to see her use them! Anyways it’s a great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!