[Report This]Date: July 15 2026 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice ending. Way to stick the landing on this great erotic story! Love the irony element in the final chapter and you finished with a bit of a happy feel to the story, with the two protagonists becoming friends. In addition, you've concluded the story in a way where you can write a sequel with one or both characters, should you choose to. As a fellow author, I can appreciate that flexibility.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2026 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
It’s really good. In stories like this, I always want the people who killed or tormented others to end up suffering the same fate. Honestly, in most of your stories, I just want someone to suddenly show up and shoot the characters. Haha.
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for reading as well as the review + feedback! I hear you...these kind of darker vibes and stories where not everyone gets a happy ending or a perfect comeuppance aren't everyone's cup of tea necessarily.
For some folks, the heat is all about wanting to see themselves in the fantasy of a dark dom who gets everything she wants and uses others as they please, even if that means a bad ending for the good guys and a dom who often or always ends up on top. But I totally get that not being exactly to everyone's taste, it's a pretty specific vibe!
Still, I appreciate you giving any of my content a read whenever you choose to, and am glad if any of it is still enjoyable! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2026 7:58 AM Title: Epilogue: For Whatever We Lose
Good ending. I'd definitely like to see more of Talia. A fun potential dynamic for her could be someone who actually wants to be eaten hires her themself to be swallowed by her, so her dealing with the unusual idea of a target being her client
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it and it made for a good read overall. That's definitely an interesting concept for a future client for her, it's hard to imagine just exactly how she'd react to someone choosing that, would be a new experience for sure! We'll see what she runs into if I get inspired by any ideas for a future story for her.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2026 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well, this is just as exquisite as the rest of your stuff is.. no surprise..
A bit surprised there's an epilogue you mentioned, but super intrigued!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your reviews and feedback as always! Love knowing whenever any piece of work hits well for someone, and that others out there enjoy this kind of dark heat the same way I do :)
And yes, there will be a brief epilogue eventually, once I clear the backlog of ideas for other ongoing stories that I still need to get on the page first. But hopefully it won't take too many ages and makes for a satisfying tie-up of this one.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2026 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter, very well written. I'm looking forward to see if/how Harper gets the news and her reaction.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad it's still a good read. And there will be a bit of an epilogue with Harper yet to come for sure.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2026 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely loved it. The realization, the desperation, and the swallow. I kinda hope he doesn't get out of it, but I'm sure it will still be great even if he does. She's a wonderful predator though. You've made something really cool here. Future shorts on her other targets could also be fun one day
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words! That really means a lot especially given that this was one of my first experiences tackling vore as a topic so I'm glad it didn't end up being a letdown, haha.
A bit more to come in the final chapter to answer those questions, but I'm glad this one has been enjoyable--I liked writing Talia as a character a lot and definitely might consider using her in a follow-up story down the road at some point with new targets.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2026 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok wow, you could feel the fear/desperation and utter despair of Ken there.
I have to wonder will Talia learn the truth.
*is* there time to save Ken, or is he well and truly about to be digested.
And I can't help but wonder what Talia's reaction will be if she does learn the truth, as well as what Harper is going to say/do....
Such a cliffhanger.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad the emotional intensity came through, hope it was a good read. Haven't written much in the vore vein before so this was kinda like trying out a new exercise, hah.
And without spoiling anything too much, there will be a bit of resolution to those questions/cliffhangers in the epilogue when it comes out!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2026 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad she picked to send him to her butt. Love the idea of her looking at it the next morning and sort of fondly missing him.
Very curious if Harper will find out what really happened to him
Author's Response:
Glad the booty enhancement choice was an enjoyable flourish, hah. And there may be a bit of closure (for readers at least) about Harper and Talia in the epilogue when I get it on the page, so stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2026 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love her using him so fully, and seemingly being more fulfilled then she has been from a tiny before. But the hints to whats coming are so good. I can't wait to see his reaction to what's coming
Author's Response:
Thanks! Building up and drawing out the tension in this story has been a ton of fun.
[Report This]Date: May 25 2026 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I enjoyed this chapter greatly. Her finding him not to be her typical target, and enjoying the difference in feeling was fun. Knowing on some level he wants this, and enjoying an actual submissive within it. Definitely looking forward to seeing what comes next after this initial Shrinking fun
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! This has been an entertaining one to write, trying to find ways to draw out the tension in unexpected ways ahead of the climactic moments.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2026 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is remarkably well-written, with almost poetic prose and with an underlying eroticism. I love that Harper is unaware of just what she has contracted for Ken. The first 2 chapters are so good that the story could simply end here and leave the rest to the imagination and it would be fine. Or we could simply get Harper's POV for the remainder of the story (which would still leave much up to the imagination) as the contract is played out to it's fruition. Or the obvious continuation, with perspectives of each of the main protagonists - Ken/Harper/Nocturne. Lots of options for the author to take here.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your feedback, it means a lot and I appreciate it! I'm glad the setup and themes are working so far, and I agree I love how powerful the right groundwork can do for the imagination. I have a fairly clear vision for where I think it will go that will play out in future chapters, so I hope the execution of all that continues to be good reading!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2026 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the start of this, and as a big vore guy, I'm excited to see you explore that having enjoyed your other stories. I hope he doesn't end up convincing her to let him go with the misunderstanding, which seems like it may be how you go, just because the totally obvious misunderstanding turning lethal is such a fun, hot idea. But I'm still going to enjoy it if that's how you go regardless.
I do really like the idea of the certain people being able to cheat the system in various ways, to keep people permanently, turn off safety so digestion is permanent, etc.
I'm very much looking forward to more of this
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! And yeah, it's not in my regular toolbox of ideas I like to play around with, but I figured it would be fun for that exact reason--to take a crack at something that I know is such a huge area of enjoyment for lots of other folks with size kinks.
And I hear you, I'm the same way with loving those themes of cheating the system--I'm sure my love of giantesses and giants who are more than happy to "not play by the rules" if it serves their own selfish goals comes through pretty clearly in lots of what I write xD.
I won't spoil how I intend for it to go, but I hope it remains interesting as I delve into the meat of the story!