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Reviewer: OscarGinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2026 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Logged in just to say I really hope this one continues!

I’d love to see some microscopic shrinking now that Rob gave the passwords away. 

Annie should really make him regret it, keep up the great writing!



Author's Response:

Hey there, thanks for the review and feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and looking forward to more! I've split myself across too much work lately but definitely do plan to return to this one, so we'll see where things go from here.

Reviewer: sundown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2026 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Really well-written/paced.. this story is pressing a lot of buttons. Hope it's not finished. Thanks for writing and great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Really glad it's an enjoyable and hopefully hot read so far! And it's definitely not finished just yet, more to come so stay tuned :)

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2026 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

So good



Author's Response:

Glad it is a good read so far :)

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